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Energy
Energy cannot be created or destroyed
The universe nearly bursts from it
Billions of stars release their heat and light
This is how I travel through the cosmos
I’m a being of pure energy
The intent must be there, and the correct tools must be chosen
For my transformation into a physical form
Energy cannot be created or destroyed
But it can be altered
So grab a match and light up a candle
One moment, darkness creeps up on you
The next, I ignite to life with a majestic roar
One day my physical body will die, yet my energy will return to the universe
Once I embark on this journey, there is no turning back.
The universe nearly bursts from it
Billions of stars release their heat and light
This is how I travel through the cosmos
I’m a being of pure energy
The intent must be there, and the correct tools must be chosen
For my transformation into a physical form
Energy cannot be created or destroyed
But it can be altered
So grab a match and light up a candle
One moment, darkness creeps up on you
The next, I ignite to life with a majestic roar
One day my physical body will die, yet my energy will return to the universe
Once I embark on this journey, there is no turning back.
Written by
LunasChild8
Published 19th Dec 2018
Author's Note
Written for the "Birth Into the World" competition.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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19th Dec 2018 9:15pm
Beautiful enlightening piece truly profound👏👏👏
This resonates so much!
"One day my physical body will die, yet my energy will return to the universe
Once I embark on this journey, there is no turning back." Yes! The eternal return, limitless flow of infinite energy exploring existence
Lovely writing!👏👏
This resonates so much!
"One day my physical body will die, yet my energy will return to the universe
Once I embark on this journey, there is no turning back." Yes! The eternal return, limitless flow of infinite energy exploring existence
Lovely writing!👏👏
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Anonymous
22nd Dec 2018 10:07pm
Truly! I agree with this on all levels of existence. Good luck in the comp.. :)
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22nd Dec 2018 10:38pm
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29th Jan 2019 4:01pm
Awesome write, Lunas! I loved the transcendental vibe, and the cosmic imagery. I am a big fan of physics and philosophy, and have expressed this very idea before, but in different way, so I really enjoyed this one!
Thanks for sharing :)
Thanks for sharing :)
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17th Apr 2019 5:12pm
"One moment, darkness creeps up on you
The next, I ignite to life with a majestic roar"
made me think of complete, essential transformation. Great visual!
The next, I ignite to life with a majestic roar"
made me think of complete, essential transformation. Great visual!
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