loose screw reality

Crimmy,
You're such a great word artist! I love this stanza:
"the hunter wanted my thoughts  
he scoured my bible  
to find clues of reality  
when it was always plain  
a paint by numbers set so easy"

Brilliant!
I tell you, Kiddo, if I could write like you, I would never be worried!
You're awesome, Crimmy!
Love,
Matthew.

Note: Sometimes I feel naked, too, but mostly in the shower area.

thank you graciously dearest Matthew for the love and understanding on this write...

yeah, my eight years of writing here is my bible full of my personal thoughts so it both frees and makes one feel vulnerable to have it out there...

I'm so happy you dug those lines I deeply appreciate your beautiful comment...

love you my friend...

Brenda 💕

You're welcome, Beautiful Girl!
Eight years, wow! That's awesome!!
You've been soooo kind these past couple months that I've been on here that it just goes to show what a wonderful person you are. You're so good, yet so sweet. Fantastic!!

Love,
Matthew.

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thank you graciously dearest Bender you honor me greatly with such a beautiful comment... I believe we are evolving as one as poets here...

love you my friend...

love Brenda 💕

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Nice we like this and is still thinking on it

thank you graciously I IS ME I'm happy you enjoyed this and it got you thinking...

love Brenda 🌹

Every word shared opens the windows into our existence slightly wider. The hazards of penning thoughts and emotions for others to read. We are all vulnerable here. I love you, my beautiful Dark Angel

...ever your Willow

thank you beautiful Willow yes we are all of us a little vulnerable in our sharing...I made myself known to someone in life... this stems from fear of letting people know too much about me...

I love you...

love Brenda 💕

Such a great piece Brenda👏👏
Everything you write is quite enthralling pure poetic perfection👏
"the truth was found in your book of lies  
I turned and saw I was naked in front of you  
shame flushed my face  
to be so transparent  
when I thought I was a skilled sorcerous" sooo good wow thats deep and just excellent👏👏 well done Brenda as always!

thank you graciously dearest Hunter for such a beautiful comment that gifted me smiles... I was feeling a little vulnerable when I wrote this... I'm happy it spoke to you on a deep level...

love Brenda 💕

Even letting go of the need to let go, allowing what is to be as it is, no alternative expectations, no exceptions to the rule, no taboos of thought, no guarded moments, no defenses, no ulterior motives, no dogmatic subroutines, no self-righteous needs to be right, no otherness, no deductive fossilization, only an inductive sense of unfolding to the unconditional, which means things are not merely a set future. This means "identity attacks," like shame and disgust, are temporary at worst.

Passing through these many language layers, mapping out our own consciousness, we turn an face oblivion, given that a final analysis equates us all ultimately.

It's not ego then to claim your own worthiness.

thank you dearest RT I will... yes it is daunting to completely put yourself out there and on a daily basis embrace whatever is on the conscious to bear and then like you say turn and face oblivion... yes, in the end, it is worth it...

I deeply appreciate your insight into this write...

love Brenda 💕

A truly brave poem, Brenda.  Those who commented above speak of vulnerability.  You overcome the fear, and write like the sorcerous you are.  I am in awe of you.

aw thank you dearest Sir Crow sigh today is a day of vulnerability... I deeply appreciate the love you show me...

love Brenda 💕

puts one's mind to work about the words we jot down
open and free to express what in minds

sweet write

thank you graciously dearest Hackerstacker for understanding this write... yes we write most of the time like no one is looking...while on here the world is... makes you feel a bit naked...

I deeply appreciate your thoughts and RL add...

love Brenda ❤

Hiding in plane sight. Love the pic.

thank you graciously dearest Xmar...

love Brenda 💕