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Healing Process
He may recover, time will tell
Until then he proceeds through Hell
Opinions vary at the cause
Noting a variety of flaws
But there's a new nurse at the door
No screwed up neighbor out to score
She tries her best to comfort him
Perhaps indulge his latest whim
He really isn't up for much
But may well heal with her touch
She cushions his cock with her breasts
Conducting his cum pressure tests
But this is just a fantasy
A figment far as he can see
Recovery not quite what it seems
He will be whole, given his dreams.
Until then he proceeds through Hell
Opinions vary at the cause
Noting a variety of flaws
But there's a new nurse at the door
No screwed up neighbor out to score
She tries her best to comfort him
Perhaps indulge his latest whim
He really isn't up for much
But may well heal with her touch
She cushions his cock with her breasts
Conducting his cum pressure tests
But this is just a fantasy
A figment far as he can see
Recovery not quite what it seems
He will be whole, given his dreams.
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Re. Healing Process
Anonymous
14th Dec 2018 8:56pm
Excellent dream my friend. Mine become just as furious at times, and I never heal. Very good ink indeed my friend. J.

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Sorry to hear you don't heal, J. I'm having trouble in that area myself. But it's true. A furious fantasy life brings much solace. I'm not sure the medical professionals would appreciate being included in my daft fantasies. I went to a neurologist yesterday and the nurses were gorgeous. I couldn't help but let my warped imagination go. If they only knew! Thank you so much for the kind comment and RL entry. It made my day. Best of luck to you to you, and may your dreams come true.
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This is quite the hot little piece. Rhymes aren't easy for the sake of sounding cheesy, but this one rocked.;)
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14th Dec 2018 10:16pm
Thank you Pandora. I get the impression there are many here who don't go for rhymes at all, but I can't seem to help myself. It's a compulsion. l do try to manage otherwise, but it's a struggle. Thanks again!
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15th Dec 2018 4:53am
Spelling error is my compulsion and I had to correct the word rhyme in my comment. Lol. I've had fun doing them as well, usually by stanza though because I don't do them well. Others like you can do an amazing job.. each of us have a gift. I guess mine is free verse as I have no rules. A couple pieces ago, I threw one together and was pleased. Yours gets a high score on sexy and tact!
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Anonymous
15th Dec 2018 4:54am
Crow.. nice rhymes.. i do them from time to time.. you killed it, feel the passion.. great ink..
Dave
Dave

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16th Dec 2018 8:42pm
I have trouble resisting rhymes. Anyone who can do free form and other styles effectively has my respect. Thank you Dave!
Re. Healing Process
15th Dec 2018 7:49am
Oh the nurse fantasy...i wonder if us men have such a fantasy due to some latent need for women to both care for us and lust for us. Great write. I hope you a speedy recovery...but from the sounds of it you may want a slower recovery so you can keep having your nurse visit 😉
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16th Dec 2018 8:46pm
I agree with your take on the fantasy, Rjm. And, yes, I enjoy the visits, but my nurse is not quite so accommodating. So, the healing process accelerates. Thank you!
Re. Healing Process
16th Dec 2018 3:43pm
dearest Sir lusty, sexy fantasy
she must be some gorgeous nurse
to get your engines turning...
titillating write...
love Brenda 💕
she must be some gorgeous nurse
to get your engines turning...
titillating write...
love Brenda 💕
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16th Dec 2018 8:48pm
Strictly a fantasy, sad to say. The nurse I'm seeing on a short term basis is a consummate pro. She just takes my vitals and goes. One can only dream. Thank you Brenda!
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16th Dec 2018 4:01pm
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16th Dec 2018 8:50pm
No offense, Jenny. I'm just glad you enjoyed this, and thank you for the RL inclusion!