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Ēlaim me
Claim me
With desperate kisses
And seductive hisses
Claim me
With tongue laps
And playful slaps
Claim me
With sharp claws
And frantic paws
Claim me
With hungry eyes
And powerful thighs
Claim me
With your sex's scent
And lust held pent
Claim me
With ravenous womanhood
Claim me
Like only you could.
With desperate kisses
And seductive hisses
Claim me
With tongue laps
And playful slaps
Claim me
With sharp claws
And frantic paws
Claim me
With hungry eyes
And powerful thighs
Claim me
With your sex's scent
And lust held pent
Claim me
With ravenous womanhood
Claim me
Like only you could.
Published 14th Dec 2018
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2018 7:04pm
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14th Dec 2018 7:46pm
Thank you. I removed the 's' I was in two minds whether to remove the 's' or just add the apostrophe 'tongue's'...instead of my grammatical error that suggested multiple tongues instead of the laps belonging to one tongue...😊 thank you for the recommendation and proof reading.
Love the intense eroticism and how you structured this. As seductive as can be!
15th Dec 2018 7:38am
14th Dec 2018 9:57pm
Sexy af once again! I love the flow in your ink.. much like your last I believe. Amazing ink!
15th Dec 2018 7:39am
Thank You, I always love your comments. They paint my work in such a lovely light.
15th Dec 2018 5:34pm
You are most welcome. They are more than a merely lovely, my friend!!
15th Dec 2018 1:09am
15th Dec 2018 7:40am
15th Dec 2018 11:08am
Sweet sensual write Rjm. Always a nice feeling when a lover wants to claim you as theirs.
15th Dec 2018 2:41pm
Anonymous
18th Dec 2018 8:27pm
Dear lordy this is sexy erotica!
18th Dec 2018 8:36pm
