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'inner'vation
1.
interstellar drive
spiraling into the core
possibilities
2.
turgid silvery
droplets over lotus leaves
kundalini peaks
3.
stars of the tarred nights
eclipse not the Absolute
but faint gra(d/y)ing signs
4.
beyond skeletal
of famines and holocaust
minimalistic
5.
elemental self
an alchemical mishmash
infinite chaos
Published 9th Dec 2018
Author's Note
a try for missy's 'self-love' haiku comp- a collection of 5 haikus (5-7-5), each with the themes 1-5, reflecting on your 2018:
1) An achievement
2) A happy moment
3) A lesson you’ve learned
4) A proud moment
5) Your wish for the future
1) An achievement
2) A happy moment
3) A lesson you’ve learned
4) A proud moment
5) Your wish for the future
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9th Dec 2018 10:46pm
Wonderfully done, Uma. I really enjoyed the unique verbiage throughout.
Best of luck in the comp. 📝🏆
Best of luck in the comp. 📝🏆
10th Dec 2018 10:03pm
These are truly cutting haiku, which is the essence of the form. I hope you do well in the comp Uma.
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