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My Lighter Grew Legs
My lighter grew legs
It's no where in sight
I put it right here
I did, last night!
I wasn't drunk
I remember it clearly
and I need it now
I need it so dearly.
I looked on the counter
I looked by the bowl
I looked under the couch
in the closet
ontop and inside the fridge
Just where would it go?
My lighter grew legs
It had to of so
Do you want to find out
how i know?
Look here in my pocket.
I didn't put it there.
I told you it grew legs.
It crawled right in there
I swear!
It's no where in sight
I put it right here
I did, last night!
I wasn't drunk
I remember it clearly
and I need it now
I need it so dearly.
I looked on the counter
I looked by the bowl
I looked under the couch
in the closet
ontop and inside the fridge
Just where would it go?
My lighter grew legs
It had to of so
Do you want to find out
how i know?
Look here in my pocket.
I didn't put it there.
I told you it grew legs.
It crawled right in there
I swear!
Published 10th Nov 2011
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10th Nov 2011 7:09pm
smokers always lose the lighter
other smokers steal them....now that seems righter
i have lost so many that i have lost count
but i always get another....5 finger discount....lmao
other smokers steal them....now that seems righter
i have lost so many that i have lost count
but i always get another....5 finger discount....lmao
Anonymous
15th Nov 2011 2:25pm
Oh yes, How many times I have walked around trying to find my lighter...Oh my, tears of laughter running down my face. Tnx Al -x-
19th Nov 2011 3:01pm
nice job misty.
If i may throw in my two cents.
the rhyming structure you have in the first and second works well it falls into place while being read.
When i got to the third i had to stop after the third line and go back to the start of the stanza and read it again as you changed the structure.
your prerogative i know :)
i just feel that for the sake of adding two lines or removing two lines it would keep a much better time/flow.
"It had to of so" maybe you could replace that line.
anyway, an enjoyable read Misty.
shine on!
If i may throw in my two cents.
the rhyming structure you have in the first and second works well it falls into place while being read.
When i got to the third i had to stop after the third line and go back to the start of the stanza and read it again as you changed the structure.
your prerogative i know :)
i just feel that for the sake of adding two lines or removing two lines it would keep a much better time/flow.
"It had to of so" maybe you could replace that line.
anyway, an enjoyable read Misty.
shine on!
19th Nov 2011 4:32pm
thankyou Eamon, I'm glad you found some enjoyment in it. And i see what your saying. I'll take the advice. :)
11th Jan 2012 4:38am
such a silly piece, I really couldn't help but smile remembering self induced lighter disappearances. Sometimes it really does just walk it's way on out... sometimes never to be seen again :P
Anonymous
28th Jun 2012 4:15am
Can relate to this! I was a smoker and my lighter always disapearred. Love how you named your poem, perfect. Made me think back, should have taken stock out on those son of a bitches.
