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I'm On it! - - - for the Self-Love Haiku Challenge Comp
1) Achievement
Warrior spirit
Managed to stand up again
Fight back begins now
2) Happy
Out of great sadness
Light shone at end of tunnel
I now want to live
3) Lesson
I used to believe
Making friends was way too hard
New friend taught old dog
4) Proud
Collaboration
In lyrics, music and song
Touches hearts and souls
5) Future Wish
To use my poems
Next year, my one wish, be done
I'll publish that Book
Published 5th Dec 2018
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Anonymous
5th Dec 2018 10:35am
Fucks sake, Rick... I may be an old Rottweiler, but I’ve got little tears in my eyes on reading this because I know how hard it was for you to write it, like the soft Southern shite that I am.
Proud to know you, ya cantankerous bassa. 👍🏻
-M
Proud to know you, ya cantankerous bassa. 👍🏻
-M
26th Feb 2019 5:28am
Anonymous
5th Dec 2018 2:14pm
If you could see the grin on my face right now...and reading Missy's comment as well...yeah, I'm with her 500%. You are such an incredible warrior with a teddy bear heart. And I love you dearly, my friend. I'm sending so many hugs right now... :-)
26th Feb 2019 5:34am
I have so much love for you my dear friend thank you so much :-)))))
Huge big hugs :-))))))))))))))
Huge big hugs :-))))))))))))))
5th Dec 2018 2:26pm
26th Feb 2019 5:34am
5th Dec 2018 8:05pm
A quintuple whammy capturing a fine essence of the man himself. Great write. :)))
"New friend taught old dog" ... I love this line.
"New friend taught old dog" ... I love this line.
26th Feb 2019 5:36am
Anonymous
6th Dec 2018 00:56am
Huge smiles reading this David - I’ve been absent but you haven’t been absent in my heart...best of luck in the comp! 🙌🏻🙌🏻
Sending tons o hugs your way my friend...
Xoxo Taryn
Sending tons o hugs your way my friend...
Xoxo Taryn
26th Feb 2019 5:37am
awwwweee you are such a sweetie :-))))))))))))))
Love and hugs :-)))))))))))))
Love and hugs :-)))))))))))))
Anonymous
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