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Take me
Take me, I知 yours
Under beating sun
With love begun
Take me, I知 yours
On moon lit night
You still shine bright
Take me, I知 yours
At tides sweet edge
You have my pledge
Take me, I知 yours
In wooded glade
With love just made
Take me, I知 yours
In winter痴 cold grasp
It痴 to you I clasp
Take me, I知 yours
With each passing day
My love does not sway
Take me, I知 yours
Now and forever
Bound together.
Under beating sun
With love begun
Take me, I知 yours
On moon lit night
You still shine bright
Take me, I知 yours
At tides sweet edge
You have my pledge
Take me, I知 yours
In wooded glade
With love just made
Take me, I知 yours
In winter痴 cold grasp
It痴 to you I clasp
Take me, I知 yours
With each passing day
My love does not sway
Take me, I知 yours
Now and forever
Bound together.
Published 30th Nov 2018
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Anonymous
30th Nov 2018 9:07pm
Oh to watch the moon lit sky with a lover! Love it!
30th Nov 2018 9:08pm
Anonymous
30th Nov 2018 9:09pm
Oh yes!
30th Nov 2018 10:31pm
I like how you begin each stanza with "Take me, I'm yours." Then your rhymes are perfection. The word "unique" is not to be bandied about lightly, but this qualifies. Enthralling work.
30th Nov 2018 10:40pm
30th Nov 2018 11:06pm
Your beloved must surely know how very fortunate she is :) Congrats to you both!
30th Nov 2018 11:42pm
