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Of Father and the Nun
Breasts,lips and loins the four stations of her cross,
So sacrosanct to a self-definition devoid of self-esteem
The felt bristles of her fedora flagellate her areola
A single scintilla traverses her spine
Her concupiscent self-awareness belied by deadpan stare
Nudity, the only cloak of modesty from appraisingly disapproving eyes
She arches her head touching her soft flax against the fiery nape of her neck.
A wave of heat washes over her back in immolation
Drips of flame rush down between her thighs: her pelvis murmurs with spasms of delight
A man lies supine on the mattress, watching her perfectly bissected image from behind his engorged crozier
He beckons her with a light flutter of his hand as the fedora falls away
Come, he says, come....
So sacrosanct to a self-definition devoid of self-esteem
The felt bristles of her fedora flagellate her areola
A single scintilla traverses her spine
Her concupiscent self-awareness belied by deadpan stare
Nudity, the only cloak of modesty from appraisingly disapproving eyes
She arches her head touching her soft flax against the fiery nape of her neck.
A wave of heat washes over her back in immolation
Drips of flame rush down between her thighs: her pelvis murmurs with spasms of delight
A man lies supine on the mattress, watching her perfectly bissected image from behind his engorged crozier
He beckons her with a light flutter of his hand as the fedora falls away
Come, he says, come....
Published 9th Nov 2011
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Anonymous
9th Nov 2011 4:57pm
Bonang,
An erotic little glimpse behind the scene you've painted for our minds. Enjoyed the read. Is it crosier?
tornado
An erotic little glimpse behind the scene you've painted for our minds. Enjoyed the read. Is it crosier?
tornado
11th Nov 2011 9:09am
Thank you very much for the kind comment.
The word crosier has the alternate spelling crozier which I decided to go with for no particular reason.When I wrote this on another poetry website (the huge and anonymous,"AllPoetry"), there was a picture of a naked woman whose modesty was only covered with a bowler (hat) so when I posted it here I was sort of worried people wouldn't get some of the references.I'm glad you did though.Thanks again.
The word crosier has the alternate spelling crozier which I decided to go with for no particular reason.When I wrote this on another poetry website (the huge and anonymous,"AllPoetry"), there was a picture of a naked woman whose modesty was only covered with a bowler (hat) so when I posted it here I was sort of worried people wouldn't get some of the references.I'm glad you did though.Thanks again.
