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Sands of Time (with Bonzi)
Neither could let go
teasing forgiveness
despite loving words wrapped
in touches that heal and bruise
addressing the sorrow
entangled
-the illusion
this thought of forever
nothing more than sand
held between once loving hands
slipping through fingers
that widen as they span
teasing forgiveness
despite loving words wrapped
in touches that heal and bruise
addressing the sorrow
entangled
-the illusion
this thought of forever
nothing more than sand
held between once loving hands
slipping through fingers
that widen as they span
Published 29th Nov 2018
Author's Note
Much appreciation to Bonzi for injecting the perfect lines to flesh out the idea. And the title. She totally got where I was going with the initial stanza.
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Anonymous
29th Nov 2018 12:12pm
Beautiful. Keep those fingers clenched tightly.
