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Goodbye
You told me that you didn't believe in God,
That he failed you,
Little do you know you failed me too,
Couldn't you just hold on a bit longer?,
Just be a bit stronger?
I know how depressed you were,
How stressed you were,
In life there's always a new lesson to learn,
But you've been through so much pain and hurt,
ASHLEY! WHY DIDN'T U SAY A WORD?!!!,
I'm only one call away,
Maybe if I tried harder you'd be here today,
Why didn't you just fucking stay!?
I love you more than you'll ever know,
I'm your best friend ash,
Not a foe,
Couldn't you tell me what you were feeling?,
I'm crying my eyes out,
There no coming back, no damn healing.
You said you didn't believe in God,
That he failed you,
Now I'm starting to believe it's true,
How could he take the one thing that brought me peace,
Is there really a God?,
Or just a Devil, a thief?
I really don't wanna say goodbye,
But I guess this time it's really goodbye...
That he failed you,
Little do you know you failed me too,
Couldn't you just hold on a bit longer?,
Just be a bit stronger?
I know how depressed you were,
How stressed you were,
In life there's always a new lesson to learn,
But you've been through so much pain and hurt,
ASHLEY! WHY DIDN'T U SAY A WORD?!!!,
I'm only one call away,
Maybe if I tried harder you'd be here today,
Why didn't you just fucking stay!?
I love you more than you'll ever know,
I'm your best friend ash,
Not a foe,
Couldn't you tell me what you were feeling?,
I'm crying my eyes out,
There no coming back, no damn healing.
You said you didn't believe in God,
That he failed you,
Now I'm starting to believe it's true,
How could he take the one thing that brought me peace,
Is there really a God?,
Or just a Devil, a thief?
I really don't wanna say goodbye,
But I guess this time it's really goodbye...
Published 24th Nov 2018
Author's Note
Lost my best friend today
I miss u I love u soooo much
To everyone out these struggling with depression and suicidal thoughts,
Talk to someone please
Dont cause this much pain to your loved ones
I miss u I love u soooo much
To everyone out these struggling with depression and suicidal thoughts,
Talk to someone please
Dont cause this much pain to your loved ones
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24th Nov 2018 2:30pm
Sad read. Read this same day as my local radio station (in England) was featuring suicide prevention phone organisation (called The Samaritans), talking to volunteers who are on the other end for those who call in need.. Such a helpline could have benefited your friend.
Condolences to you.
Condolences to you.
24th Nov 2018 3:16pm
Very well written.
As there is darkness and light.
There must the devine to counter the devil.
As there is darkness and light.
There must the devine to counter the devil.
24th Nov 2018 11:26pm
25th Nov 2018 00:09am
Im sorry that your heart has to endure such pain
and will share with you from experience that time
doesn't heal but it gets easier to live with...
can never say when but it does
even though your heart hurts and your lungs may seem airless
....do not stop breathing.. it takes strength
hugs dear
and will share with you from experience that time
doesn't heal but it gets easier to live with...
can never say when but it does
even though your heart hurts and your lungs may seem airless
....do not stop breathing.. it takes strength
hugs dear
25th Nov 2018 2:14pm
25th Nov 2018 4:24pm
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- Edited 28th Dec 2018 6:48pm
25th Nov 2018 10:07pm
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