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Transcendence
Tranquility invites me to clear
my mind
Allowing me to leave the day’s troubles behind
Here in this space of relaxation
and repose
I’m comfortable and free to remove my clothes
Candles flicker creating
dusky ambience
Sweet spiced scent infuses the air as the flames dance
The music soothes with mellifluous mellow tones
Foretelling relief for my muscles, joints and bones
My Masseur is well-qualified and
so adept
He knows where to place hands and where they should be kept
He applies his pressures from my head to my toes
Navigating and charting my body as he goes
As tensions are released, I reflect on my escape
My world in perfect bliss far from life’s hectic pace.
my mind
Allowing me to leave the day’s troubles behind
Here in this space of relaxation
and repose
I’m comfortable and free to remove my clothes
Candles flicker creating
dusky ambience
Sweet spiced scent infuses the air as the flames dance
The music soothes with mellifluous mellow tones
Foretelling relief for my muscles, joints and bones
My Masseur is well-qualified and
so adept
He knows where to place hands and where they should be kept
He applies his pressures from my head to my toes
Navigating and charting my body as he goes
As tensions are released, I reflect on my escape
My world in perfect bliss far from life’s hectic pace.
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Re. Transcendence
Anonymous
23rd Nov 2018 9:49am
A massage is, quite possibly, the most beautiful thing on earth. You capture this well.
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23rd Nov 2018 10:03am
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23rd Nov 2018 10:10am
I trained as a masseur many years ago, though I still have skilled hands.
Dark Sun.
Dark Sun.
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24th Nov 2018 7:39am
Sensually relaxing! Make me desire a nice warm pair of hands to massage my ache away...
JJ
JJ
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Anonymous
24th Nov 2018 10:48pm
Dear Velvet, this is philosophical beauty. It's the law by which I obide and the perfect attributes and deflections are such, that I feel exactly what you are describing. Excellent ink J
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Re. Transcendence
24th Nov 2018 11:10pm
You have a fine vocabulary, and know how to use it. This is wonderfully well written and a joy to read.
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