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Ocean Falling
the ocean's falling
rain comes down
crashing, splashing
on the ground
merging, surging
flowing streams
tumbling, rumbling
canyon dreams
in the mountains
by the sea
rivers running
so quickly
leaves and branches
washed away
from the forest
here today
as I'm watching
hearing sounds
pitter patter
all around
extraordinary
every day
natural forces
here at play
splashing crashing
on the ground
ocean falling
all around
rain comes down
crashing, splashing
on the ground
merging, surging
flowing streams
tumbling, rumbling
canyon dreams
in the mountains
by the sea
rivers running
so quickly
leaves and branches
washed away
from the forest
here today
as I'm watching
hearing sounds
pitter patter
all around
extraordinary
every day
natural forces
here at play
splashing crashing
on the ground
ocean falling
all around
Published 22nd Nov 2018
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22nd Nov 2018 8:10pm
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23rd Nov 2018 1:33am
Peaceful piece poet serene scenes you've painted👌👏
"extraordinary
every day
natural forces
here at play" love that line👏
"extraordinary
every day
natural forces
here at play" love that line👏
23rd Nov 2018 2:22pm
Anonymous
24th Nov 2018 7:47pm
I loved this very much.
25th Nov 2018 4:22am
