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Back Currents

flowing and swirling
down and along
back currents, eddies
still moving on

water is oneness
water's alive
always in motion
as each of us strive

to stand in the torrent
resisting its flow...
smoothly eroding
all that we know

water is gentle
persistently strong
water returns us
to where we belong..

splashing and crashing
mixing with air
water is loving
but doesn't care

water keeps rising
into the sky
molecular mystery
how it can fly...

water is inside
all whom we see
water is all that
allows us to be

flowing and swirling
down and along
back currents, eddies
still moving on
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