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Los in g it
I, I'm Losing it,
Can't find it, place it, identify it
Can't think, can't help thinking about it,
can't help it, help myself, HELP me
please help
It's all wrong, upside down
Nothings right, nothing is where I left it
Cannot
THINK,
Remembering what, where, why, who, when, which, WHAT
My mind's blank, numb, empty,
a
v o i d
I'm losing my mind
My memory
My mojo
My w
o
r
l
d
is closing in
I'm
los
in
g
it
Can't find it, place it, identify it
Can't think, can't help thinking about it,
can't help it, help myself, HELP me
please help
It's all wrong, upside down
Nothings right, nothing is where I left it
Cannot
THINK,
Remembering what, where, why, who, when, which, WHAT
My mind's blank, numb, empty,
a
v o i d
I'm losing my mind
My memory
My mojo
My w
o
r
l
d
is closing in
I'm
los
in
g
it
Published 19th Nov 2018
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 11:22am
Lordy this is fucking brilliant...WOW!
19th Nov 2018 12:17pm
Thanks, I really appreciate that. I woke at 5am this morning with an idea in my head about Mental Health and thought the typeface and structure should reflect a distressed mind. Different for me :)
Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 12:22pm
It just works. Extremely creative
19th Nov 2018 12:56pm
The way you've structured this really compliments the theme and helps convoy a sense of scattering thoughts. Very creative! :)
19th Nov 2018 3:02pm
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Jan 2019 12:45pm
20th Nov 2018 3:41pm
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20th Nov 2018 6:24pm
Many thanks HJ, your comments arouse my soul and will spur me on to improve my output.
