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Days White Lie
Days light scalds till night
burns a hole right through me
in moons gaze
I break into sparks of suns
to become fires rage
then ash of sin
night cleaves my breath
devours whole my tongue
one step, two back, return
In the night,
I see the real
veiled by the days white lie
Joe stained smiles
sleep walks
and talks
while feet mark time,
to a drumless beat
burns a hole right through me
in moons gaze
I break into sparks of suns
to become fires rage
then ash of sin
night cleaves my breath
devours whole my tongue
one step, two back, return
In the night,
I see the real
veiled by the days white lie
Joe stained smiles
sleep walks
and talks
while feet mark time,
to a drumless beat
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Re. Days White Lie
Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 8:46am
The night does reveal hidden truths. Good write.
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Re. Days White Lie
19th Nov 2018 8:49am
interesting concept the days white lie...
sometimes the light has the habit of ruining the mysteries hold by the night
sometimes the light has the habit of ruining the mysteries hold by the night
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Re. Days White Lie
19th Nov 2018 9:28am
Re. Days White Lie
19th Nov 2018 3:40pm
Great write! I definitely feel the “devours whole my tongue” line almost daily.
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Re. Days White Lie
Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 4:30pm
Livi(I call you that because the 'en' was cut off when I first commented, but I like it, so I'm keeping it, unless you're averse to it),
What a wonderful writer you are! I'm no poet, or critic, but I thought that was beautiful.
Thanks!
Matthew.
What a wonderful writer you are! I'm no poet, or critic, but I thought that was beautiful.
Thanks!
Matthew.
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Re: Re. Days White Lie
19th Nov 2018 6:18pm
Yes please do! No, I don't have any problems with it , I'm just glad you enjoyed it! Thank you...
Re. Days White Lie
Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 11:07pm
El.. what a sweet ink.. you've got skills.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Days White Lie
19th Nov 2018 11:13pm
Wow! What an amazing compliment, thank you for your kind words Dave!
Re. Days White Lie
23rd Nov 2018 6:46am
wow lets do a collab i have so many unpublished work haha nice job i like it
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Re: Re. Days White Lie
23rd Nov 2018 6:48am
Thank you! and Yes that would be great! Let me know if there is anything you'd like me to read of yours...
Re. Days White Lie
26th Nov 2018 11:16am
Solid voice in this! This really spoke to me.
"I break into sparks of suns
to become fires rage
then ash of sin"
"I break into sparks of suns
to become fires rage
then ash of sin"
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Re. Days White Lie
13th Feb 2019 7:53am
'feet mark time,
to a drumless beat'
March of the hapless ... nice eye and write ...
to a drumless beat'
March of the hapless ... nice eye and write ...
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