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The Healing Waves
Still turmoil from incessant dreams
Extrapolations from the day
Their traces left in morning sun
But darkness still exerts its power
Impressions threaten sanity
She wakes up for my comforting
And holds me, halting the tremors
Chimeras from the caustic night
Soon burn off from her ready smile
And drop in ashes to the floor
She takes me to the calmest sea
And we lay gently on the sand
The sun warms up the soul we share
And water routs our wayward sins
Soon leaving us without a care.
Extrapolations from the day
Their traces left in morning sun
But darkness still exerts its power
Impressions threaten sanity
She wakes up for my comforting
And holds me, halting the tremors
Chimeras from the caustic night
Soon burn off from her ready smile
And drop in ashes to the floor
She takes me to the calmest sea
And we lay gently on the sand
The sun warms up the soul we share
And water routs our wayward sins
Soon leaving us without a care.
Published 17th Nov 2018
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Anonymous
- Edited 17th Nov 2018 9:41pm
17th Nov 2018 9:20pm
Beautiful words dear Crowfly, I hope that this is a pleasant feeling of well-being and that you have found the doorway to the Eldorado. Hugs my friend. J
17th Nov 2018 9:48pm
I really continue to be in search of Eldorado. If it's with a lover, all the better. Consider this a pipe dream, J. Thank you!
Anonymous
17th Nov 2018 10:39pm
I'm so sorry my friend, if I misunderstood the theme. But I felt it that way. Forgive my foolishness. J
17th Nov 2018 11:07pm
You didn't misunderstand. If anything, I wasn't being clear. This is one of my fantasies, far from reality. I just wish it was true.
Anonymous
17th Nov 2018 11:11pm
Reality, my friend, is born of fantasies that we have transformed into reality. Everything is possible. I hope, one day you reach your deepest goals. You deserve it
Hugs J
Hugs J
17th Nov 2018 10:26pm
17th Nov 2018 11:11pm
Just wish I was really there. It's all in my mind, fantasizing of a lover and the sea. One day I'll hit the sands. Thanks JusTim!
17th Nov 2018 11:19pm
Nice soothing ink. It's good to dream, even if it's a million miles away from 'reality'.
(hope you get rain soon to put out the fires in Calif)
(hope you get rain soon to put out the fires in Calif)
17th Nov 2018 11:50pm
Thanks for the kind words and wishes, Josh. I'm really just a dreamer.
Hopefully some rain is on its way...
Hopefully some rain is on its way...
17th Nov 2018 11:56pm
dearest Sir Crow so beautifully soothing
to calm all that ails...
balm to the soul...
love Brenda ❤
to calm all that ails...
balm to the soul...
love Brenda ❤
18th Nov 2018 00:16am
I wanted to try a love poem without the lockstep of rhyme. I'm glad you enjoyed this Brenda. Means the world to me!
18th Nov 2018 1:24am
This is a piece of beauty; words, visuals and the sweet concept of such an experience of bliss. You say it's a pipedream, but don't lose such hope for a comforting companionship as this.
Anonymous
18th Nov 2018 4:45am
Hey Crow......outstanding!!!!!!! So inspirational........I luv this......beautiful imagery it brought my imagination......RL for me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
18th Nov 2018 10:04pm
Thanks so much for your sweet words and RL entry Flower. You're always so kind to me. I wish I could approach your love and tenderness, the glow with which you write. Me, I'm generally a dweller in the dark.
Anonymous
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19th Nov 2018 3:28am
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