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diary entry * day midday born
convinced jesus was a black man
excuse me convinced jesus was a man with love in him
excuse me convinced jesus was a man with love in him
Published 15th Nov 2018
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16th Nov 2018 00:22am
26th Nov 2018 10:12pm
this poem was written with metaphorical undertones ,,,if it was disrespectful I will remove it ,,,but your comment was throwed off ,,????I don't understand ?
8th Jan 2019 3:44pm
Hey there. Do you mind explaining the message you were trying to get across here? Thanks :)
8th Jan 2019 3:49pm
I always have problems conveying everything felt with in me.I look at poetry as art, for me to put my thoughts behind it would do the reader no justice.My metaphor could have a different meaning to you.
