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Seduction (A Collab With Jack Jenkins)
What is the value of flesh when anyone can give their body?
He longed to make her mind dripping wet,
To seduce her soul into the liquid honey of his passion,
Braiding moans with the rhythm of their thrusts,
Sensuous nectar glistening from her petals,
To see her naked, not just nude,
He longed to fill her pleasure with wild, tender instincts,
To bathe in the azure ocean that was her eyes,
Crashing in her like the tide against a beach,
A carnal storm against the walls of her heart
To love her like she was only his.
What is the value of skin when anyone can graze its depth?
She longed to press his soul to her lips,
To entice his mind with visions of her own,
Entertwining heartbeats in the raging of the storm,
Borrowing words and moments in this dream that looms,
To see him uncloaked, but far from nude.
She longed to fill his fingertips with unruly bolts of amber,
To bask in the beauty of the smile in her sky,
Gravitating in the abyss of her constellated scars,
A vulnerabilty of tender thoughts...
To love him as if he were made from the remains of her.
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14th Nov 2018 3:27pm
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Anonymous
14th Nov 2018 3:47pm
What an incredible collaboration. A soul twining, intimate landscape spread here. Truly beautiful
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14th Nov 2018 3:56pm
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Anonymous
14th Nov 2018 3:51pm
So beautiful & tender
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14th Nov 2018 3:57pm
Re. Seduction (A Collab With Jack Jenkins)
14th Nov 2018 7:36pm
Incredible detail of true desire. I truly feel desire should go far deeper than the skin.
Well played, y’all.
Well played, y’all.
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Re. Seduction (A Collab With Jack Jenkins)
18th Nov 2018 3:14am
You brought your trademark sultry style to this, great lines, love this one,
' To love him as if he were made from the remains of her. '
' To love him as if he were made from the remains of her. '
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Jack gave me a good basis to continue the poem and I am really impressed with how well this one turned out. I'm glad you enjoyed and appreciate your feedback always 😘