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A Good Pain
My eyes are melting
at your beauty
the sight of you,
dressed in black.
My skin is smoking
at your carefulness
the touch of you,
arms of velvet.
My lips are shaking
at your splender
the taste of you,
electric kisses.
My skin is burning,
my lips are bleeding,
my eyes are melting,
just like my heart.
at your beauty
the sight of you,
dressed in black.
My skin is smoking
at your carefulness
the touch of you,
arms of velvet.
My lips are shaking
at your splender
the taste of you,
electric kisses.
My skin is burning,
my lips are bleeding,
my eyes are melting,
just like my heart.
Published 6th Nov 2011
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6th Nov 2011 7:11pm
I have only felt once before, but you captured it beautifully. I commend you on the imagery.
7th Nov 2011 12:49pm
the way u discribe this love sounds like true love to me i think u did a wounderful job keep it up
