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They Won’t Be Watching Us
Three years ago came here,
Just me alone to write.
A poet, far and near,
Since, hasn’t left the site.
My anniversary’s today
That I should celebrate,
A beginning on display
Although I think I’ll wait.
’For what?’ he’’s gonna think.
For years before this day,
We’ve given each our words.
It’s what was there before,
It’s never been just part
Or only one of us.
We knew right from the start.
I reach and take your hand—
Yes, that hand, the left one.
The hand that does the work,
The other makes the words.
And with the hand I hold
Up to my lips, a pout
To kiss each fingertip,
Then suck upon the thumb.
The sound the readers hear
Is what they want to hear.
I welcome what they hear,
They otherwise can’t see.
My lover, you and me,
It’s only us unseen.
The floor, the bed, the hall,
In every place we’ve been,
We’ve gone and done it all.
And now it’s here, the time
Within the words we’d rhyme.
In your car, train or bus
They won’t be watching us.
Just me alone to write.
A poet, far and near,
Since, hasn’t left the site.
My anniversary’s today
That I should celebrate,
A beginning on display
Although I think I’ll wait.
’For what?’ he’’s gonna think.
For years before this day,
We’ve given each our words.
It’s what was there before,
It’s never been just part
Or only one of us.
We knew right from the start.
I reach and take your hand—
Yes, that hand, the left one.
The hand that does the work,
The other makes the words.
And with the hand I hold
Up to my lips, a pout
To kiss each fingertip,
Then suck upon the thumb.
The sound the readers hear
Is what they want to hear.
I welcome what they hear,
They otherwise can’t see.
My lover, you and me,
It’s only us unseen.
The floor, the bed, the hall,
In every place we’ve been,
We’ve gone and done it all.
And now it’s here, the time
Within the words we’d rhyme.
In your car, train or bus
They won’t be watching us.
Author's Note
Nov 9: To my Tomcat who’s 3 years here, 2 week’s after I joined DUP, is coming up in 2 weeks.
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Re: Re. They Won’t Be Watching Us
10th Nov 2018 2:22am
Thank you, my friend.
And yes, I’m not kidding... today I’ve been here 3 whole years.
My gawd
And yes, I’m not kidding... today I’ve been here 3 whole years.
My gawd
Re. They Won’t Be Watching Us
10th Nov 2018 2:17am
Happy Anniversary and don't mind if they are watching us, watching you. Really love this one as it read so much like lyrics to a song.
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10th Nov 2018 8:30am
Why thank you for that, Stanhoven, you’re right - it does sound like lyrics! I’m so very pleased by your enjoyment, and for the honor of place on your Reading List.
Re. They Won’t Be Watching Us
10th Nov 2018 2:21am
Happy Third Anniversary, beautiful tigress! You're an amazing poetess, and I'm so glad to have met you and experience your kindness. I hope you'll never leave DUP and I look forward to all of the beautiful poems you'll undoubtedly create in the years to come.
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Ooh, thank you so much, dearest moon child, this means so much to me. And I will always try to express through poetry as long as I breathe.
You are so dear, my sweet, fierce sister!
🌜🔥✍🏻 🐅
You are so dear, my sweet, fierce sister!
🌜🔥✍🏻 🐅
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10th Nov 2018 2:30am
Re. They Won’t Be Watching Us
Anonymous
10th Nov 2018 7:37am
Jadey,
You're awesome, my friend! Fantastic writing as usual. I loved that!! And congrats on the three year anniversary! This site, and we, are so lucky to have you!!
Love,
Matthew.
You're awesome, my friend! Fantastic writing as usual. I loved that!! And congrats on the three year anniversary! This site, and we, are so lucky to have you!!
Love,
Matthew.
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10th Nov 2018 8:37am
*knees down to put a brand new leather collar on, and snaps it around your neck*
Thank you, Puppy. And my, don’t you look handsome.
*pats your head and hugs you goodnight*
Thank you, Puppy. And my, don’t you look handsome.
*pats your head and hugs you goodnight*
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Anonymous
10th Nov 2018 4:08pm
My God, you're awesome, girl.
Thank you!! (That old collar was chaffing me. Lol).
Matthew.
Thank you!! (That old collar was chaffing me. Lol).
Matthew.
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Re. They Won’t Be Watching Us
10th Nov 2018 2:42pm
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10th Nov 2018 2:51pm
Thank you, Tim. And definitely, my friend. We cherish each other, especially after three years.
♎️🐯3️⃣😸♍️
♎️🐯3️⃣😸♍️
Re. They Won’t Be Watching Us
10th Nov 2018 4:49pm
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11th Nov 2018 1:04am
Re. They Won’t Be Watching Us
10th Nov 2018 9:35pm
A very nice anniversary gift for one who obviously has taken residence in your thoughts.
And a very Happy Anniversary salute to you as well. May there be many more in the years to come.
And a very Happy Anniversary salute to you as well. May there be many more in the years to come.
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11th Nov 2018 1:09am
Aah, thank you, dear tryst... your supportive comments are always like a congenial smile with one corner elbowed. And I hope we all have many more years to come together here.
Re. They Won’t Be Watching Us
10th Nov 2018 10:02pm
I echo the others above in wishing you a Happy Anniversary. You're one of the most treasured writers here. I hope you're around for at least another three years, composing marvels such as this. Excellent job, Jadey!
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11th Nov 2018 1:18am
My dearest crowfly friend, I’ll try to be here for another three years at least if I can... if you’ll try, too.
Let’s toast to that, shall we?🥂
Let’s toast to that, shall we?🥂
Re. They Won’t Be Watching Us
11th Nov 2018 00:41am
"I reach and take your hand—
Yes, that hand, the left one.
The hand that does the work,
The other makes the words."
Never let them see the secret dreaming
love it
Jeff
Yes, that hand, the left one.
The hand that does the work,
The other makes the words."
Never let them see the secret dreaming
love it
Jeff
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11th Nov 2018 1:20am
Re. They Won’t Be Watching Us
11th Nov 2018 5:46am
hip hips hoooray
u two have cum a long way
stay on the path and celebrate
a happier today
than twas yesterday
of tomorrow who can ever say
u may
u two have cum a long way
stay on the path and celebrate
a happier today
than twas yesterday
of tomorrow who can ever say
u may
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11th Nov 2018 6:57am
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11th Nov 2018 6:59am
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13th Nov 2018 5:56am
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13th Nov 2018 7:45am
Thank you so much, dear Howlings...
will do our best, as we return such wishes to you.
💞
will do our best, as we return such wishes to you.
💞
Re. They Won’t Be Watching Us
Oh, that's just a shame, because I know what kind of education we could provide - if they'd just pay attention.😆
I love this and the three years - and they should be watching - I like when they watch!
tomcat
I love this and the three years - and they should be watching - I like when they watch!
tomcat
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