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Euphoric in your Forfeit
I'll exude
exude
exude
moods with room for truth
for truth
ruthless blackish bloodloss
soothing...
You posture as you prove
and prove
...and prove...
diluting
deluded
decaying
in a circuit
I pray those trinkets
aren't solely
worthless
...a soul
a soul
your soul's
on purpose
exude
exude
moods with room for truth
for truth
ruthless blackish bloodloss
soothing...
You posture as you prove
and prove
...and prove...
diluting
deluded
decaying
in a circuit
I pray those trinkets
aren't solely
worthless
...a soul
a soul
your soul's
on purpose
Published 8th Nov 2018
| Edited 9th Nov 2018
Author's Note
...a letter to a lost one.
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8th Nov 2018 10:42pm
reconciliation and atonement come to mind.
if only we could send and receive letters from the grave, how much more interesting things would become and what would be the buffer between worlds? and so we shall open the floor for debate.
if only we could send and receive letters from the grave, how much more interesting things would become and what would be the buffer between worlds? and so we shall open the floor for debate.
9th Nov 2018 6:11am
Yessir, that's hopefully the result.
Actually, it's inspired by, and toward a living soul. A deadened, but living soul.
Yes, it is quite the discussion.
Actually, it's inspired by, and toward a living soul. A deadened, but living soul.
Yes, it is quite the discussion.
8th Nov 2018 10:46pm
8th Nov 2018 11:18pm
Killer.......your works is getting as dark (?cynical?) as mine. HA........no comparison intended. Apples & Oranges, yknow? LOVE up'on ye dear.........
Euphoric Forfeiture ..... damn. Why didn't I think'o'that?
Euphoric Forfeiture ..... damn. Why didn't I think'o'that?
9th Nov 2018 6:13am
Yup. I tend to run a bit "low".
Once an old friend said his impression of writing was that "it wasn't exactly for the jovial of heart". I typically agree.
Love you too dude!
Once an old friend said his impression of writing was that "it wasn't exactly for the jovial of heart". I typically agree.
Love you too dude!
9th Nov 2018 00:08am
Poignantly effective, AtomikOne. That ending though . . .love the bolded emphasis.
9th Nov 2018 6:12am
9th Nov 2018 12:50pm
Love your touch of dark here poetess, love lost in their shadows. “Your soul’s - on purpose” ...excellent!
9th Nov 2018 2:42pm
Thanks NBB, exactly. "Love lost in their shadows" is a perfect description.
