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Floating Into A New Life
have you ever felt like a leaf
catching the wind just right
drifting into a new day of life
wondering where it will take you
will they be here for more than a ride
or blown away as you exhale
breathing as if your spirit is free
all the while hoping for a soft landing
wrapping around anyone who luvs back
holding on tight till the next breeze
takes you floating down another rapid
further away from all you’ve known
Inspiration~
~on my way to work a leaf drifted upon my wiper blade,
wrapped around it for a few miles,
then the wind took it to another wind shield~
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
catching the wind just right
drifting into a new day of life
wondering where it will take you
will they be here for more than a ride
or blown away as you exhale
breathing as if your spirit is free
all the while hoping for a soft landing
wrapping around anyone who luvs back
holding on tight till the next breeze
takes you floating down another rapid
further away from all you’ve known
Inspiration~
~on my way to work a leaf drifted upon my wiper blade,
wrapped around it for a few miles,
then the wind took it to another wind shield~
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Floating Into A New Life
7th Nov 2018 6:22pm
I adore poetry like this because it's life, real as it gets. Poetic observations aligned with human cycles are always lovely to read.
Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for sharing.
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Re: Re. Floating Into A New Life
8th Nov 2018 5:44pm
Awe Ahavati........you’re so very insightful.......nature is very inspirational to me.........I believe it will talk to you if you open your mind and listen.......thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Floating Into A New Life
7th Nov 2018 6:41pm
You have such a talent for seeing beauty, I for one love reading your insightful expressions. Keep sharing your wonderful spirit here and everywhere.
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Re: Re. Floating Into A New Life
8th Nov 2018 5:45pm
Hey TIG........you always make me smile.......thank you for your support and enthusiasm upon my ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Floating Into A New Life
7th Nov 2018 8:30pm
Finding beauty in such ordinary things is a gift. You take a simple leaf and give it your special luv. Great write, sweet Flower.
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Re: Re. Floating Into A New Life
8th Nov 2018 5:48pm
Hey Crow........thank you for your touching response.......I’m very fortunate to be able to feel the simple things in life......they’re beautiful.......appreciate you always.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Floating Into A New Life
7th Nov 2018 9:13pm
Love the inspiration
I thought of this only the other day
Oddly enough I gave a safe journey prayer as it fluttered away
I thought of this only the other day
Oddly enough I gave a safe journey prayer as it fluttered away
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Re: Re. Floating Into A New Life
9th Nov 2018 1:38am
Hey Rose.......thank you for your always touching words......I’m your leaf is in a place of comfort.......nature is so inspiring........purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Floating Into A New Life
8th Nov 2018 1:39am
Re: Re. Floating Into A New Life
9th Nov 2018 1:40am
Hey Lily......this is so true.......if we did I’m sure there would be times we would change fate.....LOL! Thank you Sista......always luv your insight.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Floating Into A New Life
12th Nov 2018 10:13pm
Re: Re. Floating Into A New Life
13th Nov 2018 3:10am
Hey Ossy......I’m honored to have such praise from you.......thank you my friend.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Floating Into A New Life
14th Nov 2018 1:46am
Hey Orenda........very honored by your response.......thank you......glad you enjoyed this so much......purple luv & hugs xo :)