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We Laugh ~ We Cry (co-write with Lily aka Tracey_Leigh)
And remember when
life was so different
time didn’t seem to matter
luv wasn’t so invisible
Instead the moments
shared created a fire
that seared our skin
ravishing our senses
Hearts poured out
emotions of luv
felt so divinely
as we danced to thunder
It all felt like perfection until we fell
bruised knees with muddied hands
betrayed by joy our hearts
screamed for mercy
Surrendering sorrowful tears
hidden by pouring rain
lifting cries to heaven above
pleading for our souls to heal
and here it ends with tears streaming down the faces of love~
with memories forever making us laugh or cry~
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl & Lily All Rights Reserved
life was so different
time didn’t seem to matter
luv wasn’t so invisible
Instead the moments
shared created a fire
that seared our skin
ravishing our senses
Hearts poured out
emotions of luv
felt so divinely
as we danced to thunder
It all felt like perfection until we fell
bruised knees with muddied hands
betrayed by joy our hearts
screamed for mercy
Surrendering sorrowful tears
hidden by pouring rain
lifting cries to heaven above
pleading for our souls to heal
and here it ends with tears streaming down the faces of love~
with memories forever making us laugh or cry~
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl & Lily All Rights Reserved
Published 9th Nov 2018
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
9th Nov 2018 1:59am
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Hey Bender.......thank you for your enthusiasm on our ink......we appreciate your visit......luv & hugs flower & Lily xo :)
13th Nov 2018 1:56pm
9th Nov 2018 6:20am
Really enjoyed how each verse eased effortlessly into the other
For a collaboration it's well written
I shall read again today indeed.
Hey Rose.......we thank you for the graceful response.......honored by the RL add on.......luv & hugs flower & Lily xo :)
13th Nov 2018 1:57pm
Sometimes I think it's just easy for us because we have looked inside each other's souls...xo Thank you for reading us..
9th Nov 2018 12:49pm
Loved this - moving between innocence and the recognition of growing up. Flows really nicely too.
13th Nov 2018 3:25am
Hey Josh.......we thank you for your visit....... wry happy you’ve enjoyed this........luv & hugs xo :) flower & Lily
13th Nov 2018 12:18pm
"Lily" - also one of my granddaughter's names - good choice (Eva Lily and Imogen Rose - sisters). :))
13th Nov 2018 1:59pm
My pen name was Lily Mae after my grandmother. I always wanted a girl to name Rose. So I had Siamese cats called Lily and Rose :) xo Thank you for reading us..
9th Nov 2018 3:01pm
13th Nov 2018 3:27am
Awe Lily.......you inspire me greatly as well.......thank you for the luv......ways an honor to share ink with you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
10th Nov 2018 6:14pm
Purples, and Tracey,
That was beautiful girls!! Like yourselves!!
This is why we're here! Beautiful poetry, beautiful friends, love.
Tracey, I don't know you yet, but you did great. Purple, you're the nicest person ever, and you always do great!
Thanks!
Matthew.
That was beautiful girls!! Like yourselves!!
This is why we're here! Beautiful poetry, beautiful friends, love.
Tracey, I don't know you yet, but you did great. Purple, you're the nicest person ever, and you always do great!
Thanks!
Matthew.
Hey Matt.......we are honored by your praise........we thank you for such uplifting words.......you’re great too.....honored by the RL add on.......luv & hugs flower & Lily xo :)
13th Nov 2018 2:00pm
Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words and Flower is always easy to work with. Her heart and soul are huge...xo
Anonymous
13th Nov 2018 2:54pm
You're welcome Tracey. Thank you!
Isn't she nice? I've always advertised her as the nicest person I've ever met, and have yet to be sued for false advertisement!
You're nice, too, though!
Thanks,
Matthew.
Isn't she nice? I've always advertised her as the nicest person I've ever met, and have yet to be sued for false advertisement!
You're nice, too, though!
Thanks,
Matthew.
12th Nov 2018 1:43am
13th Nov 2018 3:31am
Hey Billy........we are so happy you enjoyed this and smiled with us.......thank you for your kind visit......luv & hugs flower & Lily xo :)
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13th Nov 2018 3:32am
Hey Ossy.......we are happy this stirred emotions......hopefully good......thank you for smiling upon our ink......luv & hugs flower & Lily xo :)
13th Nov 2018 2:02pm
Thank you so much.. Gail and I are an emotional duo that's for sure lol.. xo
absolutely love Lily, yes aka Tracy!
had the pleasure of her company when I was dwelling
under a different pseudonym and was going through
a horrible time
she never wavered away from my dark stumbles :)
y'all two are magnificent hearts and courageous
with fire
<3
had the pleasure of her company when I was dwelling
under a different pseudonym and was going through
a horrible time
she never wavered away from my dark stumbles :)
y'all two are magnificent hearts and courageous
with fire
<3
13th Nov 2018 4:02am
Awe Howling.......we are honored by your smile upon our ink.......I have to agree about Lily...she’s a rare gem of a soul......happy you’ve gotten to know her......honored by the RL add on.......luv & hugs flower & Lily xo :)
13th Nov 2018 2:03pm
