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Frozen Soul
Where is my fallen angel now?
The stream of love no longer flows.
I bathe beneath her fading star,
Escaping dreams so long ago.
I feel the contours of her flesh.
Her distant voice will never die.
She whispers from her balcony,
Across the waves in lullabies.
As winter falls on thorny ground,
Her fabled sigh retreats in mist.
An evanescent memory,
Forever lost in summer bliss.
The halo of her golden crown,
Still resonates inside my mind.
Though love was frozen in her heart,
Forgotten souls embrace through time.
The stream of love no longer flows.
I bathe beneath her fading star,
Escaping dreams so long ago.
I feel the contours of her flesh.
Her distant voice will never die.
She whispers from her balcony,
Across the waves in lullabies.
As winter falls on thorny ground,
Her fabled sigh retreats in mist.
An evanescent memory,
Forever lost in summer bliss.
The halo of her golden crown,
Still resonates inside my mind.
Though love was frozen in her heart,
Forgotten souls embrace through time.
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Contemplation.
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Re. Frozen Soul
7th Nov 2018 5:32pm
Well laid out, we all get these feelings...I hope you find a new love to warm your soul
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8th Nov 2018 2:32am
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8th Nov 2018 2:34am
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Anonymous
7th Nov 2018 5:49pm
Beautiful piece SK...
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8th Nov 2018 2:36am
Thanks so much. I enjoy writing love poems, even though love is hard to find.
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8th Nov 2018 2:39am
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8th Nov 2018 2:05pm
Re. Frozen Soul
Forgotten souls embrace in time. Is that in the mind or are we talking reunions here?
A well-constructed poem which has a lovely flow. I very much enjoyed reading it.
An almost whimsical lament is how I might describe it.
Thank you. Billy. :-)
A well-constructed poem which has a lovely flow. I very much enjoyed reading it.
An almost whimsical lament is how I might describe it.
Thank you. Billy. :-)
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9th Nov 2018 5:34pm
Thanks for your comments. I wrote this for somebody I admire.
Some poems write themselves. This just flowed out of me.
Some poems write themselves. This just flowed out of me.
Re. Frozen Soul
9th Nov 2018 2:58pm
"Love was frozen in her heart" - a stunning line!
This Ice Queen is a very pleasant surprise from you.
Excellently written, Dark Sun
This Ice Queen is a very pleasant surprise from you.
Excellently written, Dark Sun
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9th Nov 2018 5:38pm
Thanks Selena for your kind words. You always put a smile
on my face. I enjoyed writing this.
Dark Sun. :-)
on my face. I enjoyed writing this.
Dark Sun. :-)