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Your Sun
"It was then your sun
brushed her kiss upon my cheek"
I blushed, as the beauty left it's mark
warmth with a simple hint of mirth
it was heaven waking upon your earth
through mud or muck or rain
with you it was not the same
a peace just overcame
butterflies danced upon the hills
as your winds blew in my ear
whispered secrets just sang for me
with a sea side guarantee
your sun it shone from dawn to dusk
and in the nighttime wore my musk
the stars appeared with a lasting look
spilling love as hearts overtook
brushed her kiss upon my cheek"
I blushed, as the beauty left it's mark
warmth with a simple hint of mirth
it was heaven waking upon your earth
through mud or muck or rain
with you it was not the same
a peace just overcame
butterflies danced upon the hills
as your winds blew in my ear
whispered secrets just sang for me
with a sea side guarantee
your sun it shone from dawn to dusk
and in the nighttime wore my musk
the stars appeared with a lasting look
spilling love as hearts overtook
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Re. Your Sun
7th Nov 2018 2:55pm
dearest Tim beautiful rhythm to a gorgeous write...
so passionate I'm really feeling this
it's left me with a glow...
love Brenda ✨
so passionate I'm really feeling this
it's left me with a glow...
love Brenda ✨
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Re: Re. Your Sun
7th Nov 2018 3:04pm
Re. Your Sun
Anonymous
7th Nov 2018 3:02pm
Sounds like somebody found his morning sunshine. :-)
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Re: Re. Your Sun
7th Nov 2018 3:06pm
Thanks Willow, it was one ray that came out yesterday for less than a minute but it was enough to leave an impression 🙂
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7th Nov 2018 4:18pm
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7th Nov 2018 5:52pm
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Re. Your Sun
7th Nov 2018 8:46pm
I love the modesty of your last reply, "a work in progress." Maybe so, but the quality of your work is currently outstanding. "Your Sun" exemplifies this perfectly.
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8th Nov 2018 00:28am
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