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imaginery violins i
..perforated face with knives..
..the head held under the surface..
(burn)
..dislocate consiousness..
..lifted out of the face at the center of the stoning circle..
(burn)
..the head held under the surface..
(burn)
..dislocate consiousness..
..lifted out of the face at the center of the stoning circle..
(burn)
Published 28th Dec 2009
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Anonymous
28th Dec 2009 7:51pm
A bemusing but possibly brilliant short sting of peculiar images. May I ask one question though? Why do you never use capitals, even in the titles of each piece? (I have nothing against this technique, especially as I myself sometimes use it, I was just curious).
28th Dec 2009 8:08pm
well I did a ton of shrooms a while back and thought I was God for like 2 years.. so I started only using capitals when using my name or the word I.. now it's just a habit.. same thing with the double periods at the end of sentences.. just habit.. I was changing things up trying to make things interesting even in punctuation.. I change that up every once in a while as well
29th Dec 2009 1:46am
i really like how dark your style of writing is. and i loved the imagery in this. great job!
29th Dec 2009 1:57am
