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My Perfect Place
Blood bubbles up all around me
Bodies float up and remind me
Knives rain down from above me
And the smell of death surrounds me
My perfect place
Screams echo all around me
Faces contort in pain and remind me
The light disappears from above me
And the sound of silence surrounds me
Nobody will know of my perfect place
-Anime21-
Bodies float up and remind me
Knives rain down from above me
And the smell of death surrounds me
My perfect place
Screams echo all around me
Faces contort in pain and remind me
The light disappears from above me
And the sound of silence surrounds me
Nobody will know of my perfect place
-Anime21-
Published 5th Nov 2011
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Anonymous
7th Apr 2012 9:45pm
Well structured and written
Not sure if you are writing from the point of view of a bloodthirsty pirate or a psychopath or just goth
keep on writing
Not sure if you are writing from the point of view of a bloodthirsty pirate or a psychopath or just goth
keep on writing
15th Jun 2013 8:33am
