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The Gift
I dwell within
concentric thought
runs rings around
and swirls about
deep digging
mining the layers
searching for essence
to bring forth
from the depth
of my lair
a creature
gives a gift
to the world
love happens
concentric thought
runs rings around
and swirls about
deep digging
mining the layers
searching for essence
to bring forth
from the depth
of my lair
a creature
gives a gift
to the world
love happens
Published 2nd Nov 2018
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Anonymous
2nd Nov 2018 4:13pm
Angel!
It's good to have you back!!
And I loved that! (I can never give honest critique, because everyone's poems are wonderful in their own way, and as they conceived them, but I think that's fantastic!).
Matthew.
It's good to have you back!!
And I loved that! (I can never give honest critique, because everyone's poems are wonderful in their own way, and as they conceived them, but I think that's fantastic!).
Matthew.
2nd Nov 2018 7:28pm
Thanks Matthew. I am still very distracted by hope to slowly catch up with you folks.
2nd Nov 2018 5:05pm
Poems can be particularly convincing without complete sentence, which really made this work. Kudos!
2nd Nov 2018 7:29pm
3rd Nov 2018 11:03am
welcome back Ange,
hope you find time, and soon.
...and that you for the gift...
hope you find time, and soon.
...and that you for the gift...
3rd Nov 2018 11:49pm
6th Nov 2018 9:03am
You're welcome, and hey, just noticed...this your 100th. Congrats on the century.
3rd Nov 2018 9:42pm
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