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a warrior's prayer
with a godlike voice
chastised by thunder
christened in truth
awakened to the reality of you
seer, lady of faith
watch on as I take breath
swimming in the ocean of wisdom
diving deep into true emotion
my fledgling attempts are just the beginning
your spirit guides
in Dreamtime I see you
combat boots pulled tight
walking the forested paths
you enter the mortal world
prepared for war
I see you in darkness cover
hear you with my mind's talisman
the future is projected
and ever so protected
it will be as it should be
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Re. a warrior's prayer
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2018 3:44pm
That last line is powerful. Such a beautiful prayer, my beautiful Dark Angel. Ever the warrior, even when unaware. I love you...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. a warrior's prayer
2nd Nov 2018 3:45pm
thank you beautiful Willow for such a loving vision of me...
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
Re. a warrior's prayer
2nd Nov 2018 4:25pm
Re: Re. a warrior's prayer
3rd Nov 2018 3:03pm
Re. a warrior's prayer
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2018 5:38pm
Crimmy,
You are truly a wonderful poet!
I could read you forever.
Matthew.
You are truly a wonderful poet!
I could read you forever.
Matthew.
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Re: Re. a warrior's prayer
3rd Nov 2018 3:04pm
Re. a warrior's prayer
2nd Nov 2018 7:31pm
I've always thought of you as a warrior, Brenda. Sometimes fierce, sometimes thoughtful. You always astonish me whatever your poetic mood. Fantastic work!
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Re: Re. a warrior's prayer
3rd Nov 2018 3:05pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow for seeing me as a warrior you make me blush...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. a warrior's prayer
3rd Nov 2018 3:05pm
Re. a warrior's prayer
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2018 8:21pm
Brenda.. beautiful, and brilliant.. most of all filled with hope.. love you..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. a warrior's prayer
3rd Nov 2018 3:06pm
Re. a warrior's prayer
2nd Nov 2018 11:07pm
"chastised by thunder
christened in truth
awakened to the reality of you'
You pulled me to the deep side of the pool in this ritual telling...
Felt prophetic...
I love to feel that way
love
Jeff
christened in truth
awakened to the reality of you'
You pulled me to the deep side of the pool in this ritual telling...
Felt prophetic...
I love to feel that way
love
Jeff
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Re: Re. a warrior's prayer
3rd Nov 2018 3:07pm
thank you graciously dearest Jeff for your wonderful vision of this write...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. a warrior's prayer
3rd Nov 2018 3:08pm
Anonymous
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4th Nov 2018 5:00pm