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a quick exit ..
the ticket inspector
demands to see my ticket
I can't find it
he says I'll have to get off the train
I say well
slow down a minute ..
Published 29th Oct 2018
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29th Oct 2018 1:55am
29th Oct 2018 2:25am
Snort! chuckle... heheheh,
Damn! That was fun... thanks for the giggle ... Made my day... Ely
Damn! That was fun... thanks for the giggle ... Made my day... Ely
29th Oct 2018 5:19am
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29th Oct 2018 11:32am
I read this somewhat differently than it was intended and it spoke of the starkly contrasted realities we often contend with on a daily basis. You need this. You don't have this.
But do we really need to be on the train in the first place?
But do we really need to be on the train in the first place?
29th Oct 2018 1:16pm
From the title I thought it was going to be an adroit comment on Brexit - how wrong can one be. :))
30th Oct 2018 00:21am
