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Butterfly
I softy moaned my heart’s desire
He came unto my Chi like a beautiful rainstorm
Merged my brain with his, rapture felt as molten fire
Sultry words kept my heart basked in his comforting warmth
Invaded the Charka root of my soul with poetic dreams
Two lips serenading, consoling within the blindness of dark
Revealed cadence of his bodily songs, so true, so sweet, so serene
So many lyrics for others, so many melodies, yet, his voice silently larks, his love lashes tenderly marks
Dripping whispers of tasted honey
You’ve famishly sapped of the maple tree
Roses, chocolates given of heart, blue skies caressed, kisses to marvel in, endless skies to soar, days so sunny
My essence, my heart, you’ve asked of me, wishes blanketing my gentle needs
Alone I must journey on
Our music has sailed on the wind
Echoes, passion, moans, desires, lust, to your ears, yet not the sheet music of a lover’s song
Go my love, fly to the quiet horizon, lost hearts shall mend, a sealed kiss upon my love letter I sweetly send
He came unto my Chi like a beautiful rainstorm
Merged my brain with his, rapture felt as molten fire
Sultry words kept my heart basked in his comforting warmth
Invaded the Charka root of my soul with poetic dreams
Two lips serenading, consoling within the blindness of dark
Revealed cadence of his bodily songs, so true, so sweet, so serene
So many lyrics for others, so many melodies, yet, his voice silently larks, his love lashes tenderly marks
Dripping whispers of tasted honey
You’ve famishly sapped of the maple tree
Roses, chocolates given of heart, blue skies caressed, kisses to marvel in, endless skies to soar, days so sunny
My essence, my heart, you’ve asked of me, wishes blanketing my gentle needs
Alone I must journey on
Our music has sailed on the wind
Echoes, passion, moans, desires, lust, to your ears, yet not the sheet music of a lover’s song
Go my love, fly to the quiet horizon, lost hearts shall mend, a sealed kiss upon my love letter I sweetly send
Author's Note
Metamorphosis has always been the greatest symbol of change for poets and artists. Imagine that you could be a caterpillar one moment and a butterfly the next.
Louie Schwartzberg
Louie Schwartzberg
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Re. Butterfly
28th Oct 2018 8:30pm
Loved the Charka tone to this write. In our search for spiritual metaphors we poets to often ignore the vast spiritual philosophy of the East.
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Re: Re. Butterfly
28th Oct 2018 9:17pm
Modern western medicine does even not support the existence of chakras, North Americans have never even heard of them. But the eastern nations, as well as aboriginal people all over the world, are not only aware of these chakra symbols and what they can do but have created visual pictures of the chakra symbols through inner knowing, dreams. It is pleasing to know a man understands the realm of his inner self, whereas, the reliance of his soul is governed by his earthly deeds, his thought process, and drawing spiritual energy from the sacred portal of his mind, these fundamentals are the inner core, philosophical, and mental growth, found in practicing Chakra, which I do religiously. Thank you for reading and giving me a reason to explain the benefits of spiritual worshipping my Chi with positive energy😊
Re. Butterfly
Anonymous
28th Oct 2018 8:32pm
Your words collapse me. Funny enough. I been trying to write a poem for the woman of my dreams all day.
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Re: Re. Butterfly
28th Oct 2018 8:58pm
Aww...I hope I have given you some inspiration to pen the woman of your dreams a very beautiful poem. Thanks for reading and then commenting. Enjoy your Sunday love
Re. Butterfly
28th Oct 2018 9:31pm
Re: Re. Butterfly
28th Oct 2018 9:37pm
Sometimes in life we must move forward in order to cleanse the soul for a rebirth or an earthly metamorphosis to something greater. Thank you handsome, for reading and then commenting. Enjoy your Sunday
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Re: Re. Butterfly
28th Oct 2018 10:58pm
No...I do not know why, hum, are you to tell me, Stephen.. this could be very interesting...wink
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Re: Re. Butterfly
28th Oct 2018 11:22pm
I was thinking of a very handsome butterfly as if I was female one, responding to his metamorphic of encased in a warm cocoon, a beautiful beginning if that make any sense love
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Re: Re. Butterfly
28th Oct 2018 11:36pm
Much better...the next time...you may want to add the exclamation marks.. let me know you mean it
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Re: Re. Butterfly
28th Oct 2018 11:53pm
You are such a tease, Stephen.. what am going to do with you.. wait don't answer that, I know how you think...I will use my own imagination:-)
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Re. Butterfly
31st Oct 2018 8:04pm
Very well thought out and invites empathy from the reader. Well composed and emotive.
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Re: Re. Butterfly
30th Oct 2021 6:14am
Thank you my poetess for going way back when on this oldie, much poetic respect to you..
Good morning and enjoy the remainder of your weekend in as much...
Good morning and enjoy the remainder of your weekend in as much...