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Raw

Tonight, don’t take it away,
You feeling you can save us.  
Don’t look back we have no home,  
It’s just me you’re with tonight.  
  
So pull them apart, hear it?  
The last stitch of red silk split.  
You can leave them hanging there,  
A souvenir of conquest.  
   
Now all you do is earn it,  
Mmm, I’ll cum at any price.  
She won’t do you like I do,  
Gawd, you’re not just any man.  
   
Make me raw on the outside    
As I feel on the inside.  
We won’t think of tomorrow,  
Not while we rut - nothin’s left.  
   
Take your time, my alley stray,  
We got all night, sleep all day.  
Make your move deliberately,  
Twist that hip and send it deep.  
   
You’ll see daylight when I arch,  
And the gleam of satin pearls.  
Lick it all up in your mouth,  
Let me see it on your tongue.  
   
You can tell where my eyes go,  
That I know you’ll give me some.  
As we swallow we both think  
That it’s time to fuck again.  
   
Make me raw on the outside    
As I feel on the inside.  
We won’t think of tomorrow,  
Not while we rut - nothin’s left.
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
Published
Author's Note
No rhyme scheme, just a nice, easy 7-syllable line count, staying in the groove.
This one’s loose, but nice & tight in all the right places.
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