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Tender Was His Tale
As if she were his very own poetry did he marvel - for there was a story he wished unfold. Eager was his tongue; the very pen by which he wrote upon every destination of pleasure . Contingently he wished to tell In every valley and over each tender peak; fervered were his musings then and there transcribed. Along the elongated highway to her breasts, ever so impetuously did he travel. Tender was his tale; line after line did he worship; his minds every enshrined thought did he mark. Conducively did his tongue trail; enslaved to their story was he. Deep from within his muse, did sweet love drip and pour - the ink in which she wrote the sweetest of endings. Successful was he as was his story to be told.
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Published 23rd Oct 2018
| Edited 27th Jan 2019
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Anonymous
23rd Oct 2018 2:36am
Pandora.. nicely done.. really dig your vibe..
Dave
Dave
23rd Oct 2018 7:24am
Aww. Thank you so much! It's nice to see a new face over here in my corner..welcome!
23rd Oct 2018 5:33am
23rd Oct 2018 7:27am
Thank you my sweet friend! Not just the comment love but for teaching me a new word- topographic. Those are a gift for this girl;)
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23rd Oct 2018 7:28am
Thank you my friend for such praise and for the add. Those brighten my whole day!
23rd Oct 2018 6:29am
"Tender was his tongue" would be a more to the point title. Love the description of bodily exploration, every kiss and lick tells his love. Favourite lines:
Conducively did his tongue trail; enslaved to their story was he. Deep from within his muse, did sweet love drip and pour - the ink in which she wrote the sweetest of endings. Successful was he as was his story to be told.
Conducively did his tongue trail; enslaved to their story was he. Deep from within his muse, did sweet love drip and pour - the ink in which she wrote the sweetest of endings. Successful was he as was his story to be told.
23rd Oct 2018 7:31am
Thank you as always for enlightening me on your favorite lines, I love them dearly!
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