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Ecstatic Glass of You
With a lower vibration
I make You full and wet
so as to cause a giggle,
a laugh and to sweat.
I fill You up with romantic stuff
and lots and lots of erotic!
Tickling Your insides – never enough,
I cry with laughter – symbiotic!
Like a lone Tree in a desert
I am so very thirsty
for a wet, only You can satisfy.
And then You came to me leaking
and I drew You to my lips
to drink You dry.
Savoring You, I sip
and drink You slowly down.
Sliding my tongue across
Your lips
You moan and smile
Ecstatic sounds.
I make You full and wet
so as to cause a giggle,
a laugh and to sweat.
I fill You up with romantic stuff
and lots and lots of erotic!
Tickling Your insides – never enough,
I cry with laughter – symbiotic!
Like a lone Tree in a desert
I am so very thirsty
for a wet, only You can satisfy.
And then You came to me leaking
and I drew You to my lips
to drink You dry.
Savoring You, I sip
and drink You slowly down.
Sliding my tongue across
Your lips
You moan and smile
Ecstatic sounds.
Published 23rd Oct 2018
Author's Note
This is probably as good as it gets - for me - for this category ;)
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5th Nov 2018 2:18am
I love it, great erotic write. I would suggest changing some of the you's to your. great writing , keep it up.
5th Nov 2018 4:57am
Thank you -- much appreciative
I reread and none of the changes worked for me
but i still appreciate the 2nd sight
I reread and none of the changes worked for me
but i still appreciate the 2nd sight
Anonymous
8th Apr 2019 3:48pm
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