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In the Rough
unpolished
unsettled,
a crystal
flush
within a
mind's eye
Hush
awaits a
clouded
prediction
of
uncertainty
& love.
unsettled,
a crystal
flush
within a
mind's eye
Hush
awaits a
clouded
prediction
of
uncertainty
& love.
Published 19th Oct 2018
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21st Oct 2018 9:32pm
It definitely captures a feeling of an open desire for love - with all its attendant uncertainties.
"Hush
awaits a
clouded
prediction "
... this is a great flow of words ... very evocative to the senses.
"Hush
awaits a
clouded
prediction "
... this is a great flow of words ... very evocative to the senses.
21st Oct 2018 9:39pm
Appreciate the insight and your feel for this ink of mine. Happy I am successful with saying what you read.
21st Oct 2018 9:50pm
5th Nov 2018 2:15am
whenever I hear prediction I always think of a witch doctor throwing down a handful of bones to tell the future lol.
keen love comes to mind when I read this.
well penned.
keen love comes to mind when I read this.
well penned.
5th Nov 2018 4:54am
You caused me to smile -- thank you
i am a witch but not even close to being a doctor -- lol
thank you for sharing your thoughts
i am a witch but not even close to being a doctor -- lol
thank you for sharing your thoughts
30th Jun 2020 3:44pm
30th Jun 2020 3:49pm
Anonymous
28th Mar 2021 9:37pm
I instantly thought of that phrase “a diamond in the rough” some of us are literally treasures waiting to be discovered and loved
I really liked this
I really liked this
29th Mar 2021 00:36am
