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Sweet, yearned for moments....
[simple quatrains w/couplet envoi]
I yearn your breath blended with mine,
your warming touch, like savored wine.
The way our world's then set aglow,
deeply in longing aches we know
within our dreams all we pursue,
fates hand designed for Me and You.
Embrace me in your willing arms,
two lover's needs, sate with your charms.
Disrobe us both 'neath longing eyes,
rise hunger's heat 'tween yearning thighs.
Oh, blessed be ~ lay softly down,
from your deep well, this thirst I'll drown.
High lifted knees, splayed ecstasy
warm, sweet, silk honey's flowing free.
My lips upon thy pulsing's fair
partake lush rosebud risen there.
Glistening, flowing dew of love,
upon it, tongue's caress, thereof.
With sighing moans in gratitude
of once thought lost, now's been renewed.
Your fingers twined into my hair
assures that nothing can compare
to passion's bliss felt everywhere,
it's almost more than touch can bear
in this lush interlude so rare
sweet, yearned for moments ~ lovers share.
I yearn your breath blended with mine,
your warming touch, like savored wine.
The way our world's then set aglow,
deeply in longing aches we know
within our dreams all we pursue,
fates hand designed for Me and You.
Embrace me in your willing arms,
two lover's needs, sate with your charms.
Disrobe us both 'neath longing eyes,
rise hunger's heat 'tween yearning thighs.
Oh, blessed be ~ lay softly down,
from your deep well, this thirst I'll drown.
High lifted knees, splayed ecstasy
warm, sweet, silk honey's flowing free.
My lips upon thy pulsing's fair
partake lush rosebud risen there.
Glistening, flowing dew of love,
upon it, tongue's caress, thereof.
With sighing moans in gratitude
of once thought lost, now's been renewed.
Your fingers twined into my hair
assures that nothing can compare
to passion's bliss felt everywhere,
it's almost more than touch can bear
in this lush interlude so rare
sweet, yearned for moments ~ lovers share.
Published 16th Oct 2018
| Edited 1st Jul 2021
Author's Note
Quatrains in a-a-b-b, c-c-d-d, etc; rhymes and 8-counts.
Picture from Pinterest Sensuals.
Please, feel free to critique and offer well-meant comments! : )
Picture from Pinterest Sensuals.
Please, feel free to critique and offer well-meant comments! : )
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17th Oct 2018 9:03pm
Why thank you ever-so warmly, Lil'DF,
You've made my day smile happy blessings! ⁓ Richard ; )
You've made my day smile happy blessings! ⁓ Richard ; )
27th Jul 2020 2:03am
A beautifully written sensually flowing piece all while making every two lines rhyme within 8-syllable lines. Must have taken a minute to put it together. Thank you for the write.
Thank you, Elsie, ever-so warmly and gratefully 🥀
Your praise and expressed appreciation are truly a blessing.
In answer to your comment about time spent writing this, I think it took just over an hour, including artwork choice and editing.
Hugs 'n blessings ⁓ Richard 🍃
Your praise and expressed appreciation are truly a blessing.
In answer to your comment about time spent writing this, I think it took just over an hour, including artwork choice and editing.
Hugs 'n blessings ⁓ Richard 🍃
31st May 2021 8:41pm
31st May 2021 8:52pm
Thank you for the read choice and nice comment, Fellow-Poet.
Happy days! ⁓ Richard 🍃
Happy days! ⁓ Richard 🍃
31st May 2021 8:55pm
31st May 2021 9:49pm
Oral,
If I receive more reviews like yours, I may soon begin to post more of my work.
Thank you, again! ⁓ Richard 🍃
If I receive more reviews like yours, I may soon begin to post more of my work.
Thank you, again! ⁓ Richard 🍃
10th Jul 2021 8:24pm
such sweet soft yet eroticised poem I love to create if only I could my ink is like oaks rough wood the pines intermingled too how I wish such an erotica eased out of my own ink albeit not so silently yet refreshingly as the world enjoys this lovely scene serene supreme it's just my dream allow me poet you are a sought one perhaps by those who love sweet and soft erotica
18th Jul 2021 9:01pm
Hello again, Again🍁
It is a distinct honor and pleasure to host your presence here upon my page, and to receive such encouragingly thoughtful salutations from your skillfully knowing poetic pen your words, a touchingly lyrical poem in themselves.
Nothing (to me) is more rewarding than a fellow bard expressing his appreciation and enjoyment for one of my earnest poetic efforts.
Thank you ever-so warmly and sincerely, My Fine Poetic Brother.
To You, my wish for a most beautiful Sunday eve! ⁓ Richard 🍃
It is a distinct honor and pleasure to host your presence here upon my page, and to receive such encouragingly thoughtful salutations from your skillfully knowing poetic pen your words, a touchingly lyrical poem in themselves.
Nothing (to me) is more rewarding than a fellow bard expressing his appreciation and enjoyment for one of my earnest poetic efforts.
Thank you ever-so warmly and sincerely, My Fine Poetic Brother.
To You, my wish for a most beautiful Sunday eve! ⁓ Richard 🍃
18th Jul 2021 9:34pm
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read my most read one and sexy comment contain
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10th Mar 2022 7:48pm
Thanks, Poet,
For stopping by to read and comment.
Please, keep thee safe and well! ⁓ Richard🖌
For stopping by to read and comment.
Please, keep thee safe and well! ⁓ Richard🖌
