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Others' Sadness
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Snow melts
So the streets shine in the moonlight
And the wind tries to whip the water away
Attentive feelings, attentive eyes
Sincere silence, sincere dreams
Sorrows are blasted out of reality
A sisterly kiss on my lips
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Snow melts
So the streets shine in the moonlight
And the wind tries to whip the water away
Attentive feelings, attentive eyes
Sincere silence, sincere dreams
Sorrows are blasted out of reality
A sisterly kiss on my lips
... ...
Published 13th Oct 2018
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13th Oct 2018 1:43am
Thank you.
Sweet ... Sweet moment?...
Bittersweet. Gentleness and cheerfulness after bitterness.
Pessimistic, mistic, lethargic, magic, empathetic... ... ... ... ...
Sweet ... Sweet moment?...
Bittersweet. Gentleness and cheerfulness after bitterness.
Pessimistic, mistic, lethargic, magic, empathetic... ... ... ... ...
13th Oct 2018 2:05am
I didn't get the dark and dispair at all. It read more comforting to me. The eye of the beholder...?
13th Oct 2018 2:09am
13th Oct 2018 1:50am
13th Oct 2018 1:54am
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
18th Mar 2019 2:36pm
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21st Mar 2019 6:13pm
It is contemplation, meditation, perception...
As if in a dream and/or out of the body experience other's sadness is worked out.
That's why I deserved to be kissed.
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As if in a dream and/or out of the body experience other's sadness is worked out.
That's why I deserved to be kissed.
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Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
21st Mar 2019 9:20pm
<< post removed >>
22nd Mar 2019 4:49pm
