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SENRYU_ZZZZZZZ
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published 11th Oct 2018
| Edited 12th Oct 2018
Author's Note
Desolate mindscape
Words, unattached, tumble by
WAKE! Depressed poet
Illustration: by Gahddess_Worship. 10/11/2018.
Medium: pen & ink on paper hand towel.
Words, unattached, tumble by
WAKE! Depressed poet
Illustration: by Gahddess_Worship. 10/11/2018.
Medium: pen & ink on paper hand towel.
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Re. SENRYU_ZZZZZZZ
12th Oct 2018 3:43am
Wow. That's an inspired awakening!
Hang in there.... you tamed the tumble-words beautifully here.
Hang in there.... you tamed the tumble-words beautifully here.
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12th Oct 2018 7:55am
Than you Titanium! You've understood me perfectly even with my crude drawing skills.
Re. SENRYU_ZZZZZZZ
12th Oct 2018 2:47pm
Well, I think you did very nicely. I understood it before I read the Author's Note, though I'm still not sure if it's a 'Jack and the Bean Stalk' style drawing or a road map to no where. :-)
(the cactus and sputtering puffs of smoke leads toward the latter, however, you should see my rendition of the 'Mona Lisa'
(the cactus and sputtering puffs of smoke leads toward the latter, however, you should see my rendition of the 'Mona Lisa'
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Re: Re. SENRYU_ZZZZZZZ
12th Oct 2018 3:50pm
Thank you so much Teri! Those are tumble weeds ha ha (or words to quote Titanium). Actually, puffs of smoke would fit the bill as well.
Re. SENRYU_ZZZZZZZ
12th Oct 2018 4:05pm
Re: Re. SENRYU_ZZZZZZZ
12th Oct 2018 5:27pm
Thank you Soledad! I've been way too distracted and depressed by outside influences lately that I've had trouble writing. I'm slowly gaining serenity again so I the words should once again coalesce. Just need to stop worrying 'bout things beyond my control.
Re. SENRYU_ZZZZZZZ
12th Oct 2018 10:16pm
Words of wisdom, above Gahdess. You haven't made the mistake that I have, writing even when I don't feel up to it. It's best to simply rest. In any case I love this senryu, and the napkin lay out. Better than I can do by far! Looks like your depression's on its way out.
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Re: Re. SENRYU_ZZZZZZZ
12th Oct 2018 10:21pm
Thank you Sir Crow! I certainly hope so. I originally planned to use a stock photo of tumbleweeds but then settled on something more personal that also made me stretch artistically.