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REBEL AF
Smoke rises from the pile
of opposing armies' battle dress, burned
under the old pine
laid a prayer
zenith searches for the stars
Gift of
intrigue from a
rebel
liaison
Six miles from the front
Ninth gate is closed for now
of opposing armies' battle dress, burned
under the old pine
laid a prayer
zenith searches for the stars
Gift of
intrigue from a
rebel
liaison
Six miles from the front
Ninth gate is closed for now
Published 11th Oct 2018
| Edited 23rd Oct 2018
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Anonymous
11th Oct 2018 6:27pm
You are just fucking brilliant. (Rebel Rulez)
11th Oct 2018 6:32pm
Thank you. I still have to defeat evil and make the world a safe place for my kids, but this makes me feel like I'm on at least one right track.
20th Feb 2019 10:19pm
11th Oct 2018 11:48pm
11th Oct 2018 11:52pm
Thank you and good to see you. This write began as a little plaything and became a "make love not war" tale of two fighters coming together while the world comes apart.
