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Deep Within
Gentle as a midday summertime breeze the tenderest of touches percolate
bringing on soft palpitations
to a heart that is warm and full
I look to you, resting, so beautiful resting
whisked away in some foreign land
where simplicity and happiness reside
and that cold, she never comes inside
the sun lifts her head over the horizon
and the day struggles to begin
lift your eyes to your surroundings
and thoughts lying deep within
bringing on soft palpitations
to a heart that is warm and full
I look to you, resting, so beautiful resting
whisked away in some foreign land
where simplicity and happiness reside
and that cold, she never comes inside
the sun lifts her head over the horizon
and the day struggles to begin
lift your eyes to your surroundings
and thoughts lying deep within
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Re. Deep Within
11th Oct 2018 3:17pm
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11th Oct 2018 3:19pm
Thank you Jackie. It's those moments where I am stuck between the reality of the day and dream land that are truly inspiring.
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11th Oct 2018 3:47pm
Re. Deep Within
Anonymous
11th Oct 2018 4:04pm
Tim!
That's good, my friend!!
That Cyrano job is still open! lol.
Keep writing to her, that's the secret, she'll love you forever.
MZ.
That's good, my friend!!
That Cyrano job is still open! lol.
Keep writing to her, that's the secret, she'll love you forever.
MZ.
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11th Oct 2018 4:15pm
I'm down to my last quarter so if you still want to hire me lol...thanks Matthew, I'm not planning on stopping
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Anonymous
11th Oct 2018 4:21pm
Hey!! That's the exact amount I pay!! A quarter! You can double your money, over the next year. LOL.
TTYS, my friend!
MZ.
TTYS, my friend!
MZ.
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Anonymous
11th Oct 2018 7:33pm
It's always a journey of the senses with your writing. Never know where it's going until we arrive. Very nice!
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11th Oct 2018 7:38pm
Re. Deep Within
11th Oct 2018 8:36pm
youve always been able to confess and write
beauty as it calls your heart home.
sweetly noted, dear.
beauty as it calls your heart home.
sweetly noted, dear.
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11th Oct 2018 9:16pm
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Re. Deep Within
12th Oct 2018 00:29am
Bravo Tim! I would welcome this, "whisked away in some foreign land
where simplicity and happiness." way too much vitriol, hatred, and division going on 'roun these parts.
where simplicity and happiness." way too much vitriol, hatred, and division going on 'roun these parts.
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12th Oct 2018 00:30am
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Anonymous
12th Oct 2018 2:49am
Very mellow. Just what I needed. :)
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12th Oct 2018 10:34pm
Love the message, JusTim. It pays to have and open mind and heart. And eyes wider open yet. I just hope I got this right.
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12th Oct 2018 10:43pm