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Linear Babe
Just lines
Thrown together
Like people commuting
Standing with strangers
Just lines
What was available
A vision
A thought
Just lines
No rhyme
No sugar
Fat
Thrown together
Like people commuting
Standing with strangers
Just lines
What was available
A vision
A thought
Just lines
No rhyme
No sugar
Fat
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Re. Linear Babe
Anonymous
9th Oct 2018 1:39pm
I kinda just wanna wander through a gallery and stare at your art for a while. Cup of coffee in one hand. Yeah, I could spend some time doing that quite happily
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Re. Linear Babe
9th Oct 2018 1:42pm
Re. Linear Babe
Anonymous
9th Oct 2018 1:59pm
Yes no work will get done with your art staring at me.
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Good, keep staring, soul growth courtesy of your poet and artist ....
Thanks
Thanks
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Anonymous
9th Oct 2018 2:06pm
Great idea. I got the day off then!
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9th Oct 2018 2:16pm
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Anonymous
9th Oct 2018 2:18pm
Or just a bowl of ice cream and chocolate sauce and keep staring.
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9th Oct 2018 2:22pm
Re. Linear Babe
9th Oct 2018 4:22pm
damn it dearest Poet
you evoke so much feeling with simple statements...
wonderful...
love Brenda ❤
you evoke so much feeling with simple statements...
wonderful...
love Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. Linear Babe
9th Oct 2018 9:25pm
Simple man
Simple paintings
Not available in any store
Direct from the artist only ...
Simple paintings
Not available in any store
Direct from the artist only ...
Re. Linear Babe
9th Oct 2018 4:41pm
Re. Linear Babe
10th Oct 2018 3:32am
I hate waiting in line, but this doesn't remind me of that, just the freedom of anonymity, being one line in many, it's a one liner of sorts..
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Re. Linear Babe
10th Oct 2018 5:07pm
Contemporary art with deep touch... Inspirational... I love it. Very good, PoetSpeak!
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10th Oct 2018 6:22pm
Art like poems just comes to me. I'll hear or think or see a fragment of something and then I'll make my own from it.
Appreciate you !!
Appreciate you !!