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Hardcore no Touch
While up all night as I waited for word,
Connection is down, from him haven’t heard.
The flight would be long, departure was late
To communicate, I’ll just have to wait.
I gather sentimental items near,
That will remind me of when he is here.
To explore my forbidden recesses,
That feed on our dark hidden obsessions.
A large dildo vibrates deep in my ass,
Lying back, knees lifted, legs wide first class.
Feathering black leather quirt cross my quim,
Holding back, passing time, waiting for him.
I always stay tight, my cunt takes him deep,
Arching, he grinds till my cervix goes weak.
All that I fantasize while he’s away,
Will come back tenfold if we have our way.
Lips round his scrotum will be my ball gag,
I suck on him whole, two orbs in a bag.
To press tongue against the swell of my clit,
Rolls back in my head, I swoon within it.
For hours I’m slick with oozing pre-wet,
Battery ball vibe keeps happy his pet.
Though he’s not a master, I’m not a slave,
I love what he does, and so I behave.
Finally, I knock out on top of the bed,
I’d much rather have him in me instead.
Naked, I’m covered in cum streaks & stains,
Submissive with dildo still running remains.
Connection is down, from him haven’t heard.
The flight would be long, departure was late
To communicate, I’ll just have to wait.
I gather sentimental items near,
That will remind me of when he is here.
To explore my forbidden recesses,
That feed on our dark hidden obsessions.
A large dildo vibrates deep in my ass,
Lying back, knees lifted, legs wide first class.
Feathering black leather quirt cross my quim,
Holding back, passing time, waiting for him.
I always stay tight, my cunt takes him deep,
Arching, he grinds till my cervix goes weak.
All that I fantasize while he’s away,
Will come back tenfold if we have our way.
Lips round his scrotum will be my ball gag,
I suck on him whole, two orbs in a bag.
To press tongue against the swell of my clit,
Rolls back in my head, I swoon within it.
For hours I’m slick with oozing pre-wet,
Battery ball vibe keeps happy his pet.
Though he’s not a master, I’m not a slave,
I love what he does, and so I behave.
Finally, I knock out on top of the bed,
I’d much rather have him in me instead.
Naked, I’m covered in cum streaks & stains,
Submissive with dildo still running remains.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 7th Oct 2018
| Edited 16th Oct 2018
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Re. Hardcore no Touch
Anonymous
7th Oct 2018 2:08pm
Fuck JP. I respect you committed to another so will say little. But a lady with a dildo/vibe drives me to insanity.
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Aw my gracious thanks, my friend. I actually think that’s rather sweet what you’ve said. I’ve got such a grin.
Re. Hardcore no Touch
7th Oct 2018 2:56pm
Fantasy is good for the soul Jade...love the alliterative line...quirt cross my quim
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7th Oct 2018 3:14pm
*giggles*
Thanks, dear Tim, for coming over for a read, and about the alliteration, yes. I never consciously do those, it just happens as part of the language. But when it does, oh boy.
Thanks, dear Tim, for coming over for a read, and about the alliteration, yes. I never consciously do those, it just happens as part of the language. But when it does, oh boy.
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2018 3:15pm
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Re. Hardcore no Touch
7th Oct 2018 3:25pm
Love the flowing rhyme with this Jade..and the imagery is tantalising...what a lucky guy.
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Thank you, dear Sun... how sweet your words are on this lovely day, and he won’t mind if I agree.
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Re. Hardcore no Touch
7th Oct 2018 3:49pm
There shall be RL and comment here soon...
But for now know that it is read and loved
But for now know that it is read and loved
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*tingles*
Mm yes, I feel it so well. And such a day it is for love.
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Mm yes, I feel it so well. And such a day it is for love.
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7th Oct 2018 4:36pm
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7th Oct 2018 10:17pm
I thank you with smiles for miles, dear Adam, Most pleased to have been of service. Happy day, today.
Anonymous
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7th Oct 2018 10:19pm
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Re. Hardcore no Touch
7th Oct 2018 5:08pm
a most stimulating first read of the day....pleasure in great measure...very nice....
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Thank you most happily, Lawrence, for such a warm response to my ink. Your support of my erotica is a joy.
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Re. Hardcore no Touch
Anonymous
7th Oct 2018 6:07pm
Made me smile...
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Re: Re. Hardcore no Touch
7th Oct 2018 10:09pm
Why thank you, Catman, I appreciate knowing that. I haven’t stopped smiling since.
Anonymous
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8th Oct 2018 00:22am
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Re. Hardcore no Touch
8th Oct 2018 3:33am
my screen fogged up...let me go get a towel... so I can see
love
jeff
love
jeff
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*smiles sweetly*
I have a used towel that still smells ‘Downey fresh’ should you need it. In fact, I may never wash it.
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I have a used towel that still smells ‘Downey fresh’ should you need it. In fact, I may never wash it.
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Anonymous
8th Oct 2018 9:29pm
Behave Jade!
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9th Oct 2018 2:22am
Wow! A very steamy and deeply sensual write, Jade. Love the graphic detailing and sense of anticipation.
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9th Oct 2018 3:30am
Ahh, most appreciative thanks to my dear crowfly friend. How much your way of expressing such support of erotic poetry (and for including mine), is an honor.
Re. Hardcore no Touch
11th Oct 2018 10:14pm
The vibrations quick to stir my own, to watch and wait the all of you. The rareness of the feint while humming still persists. Perhaps I shall try to find that rest.
What brilliant thrills!
tomcat
What brilliant thrills!
tomcat
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Bright vibes & brilliant shudders...
can you imagine the sight awaiting you, jolted by continuous shock waves...
blurred vision
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can you imagine the sight awaiting you, jolted by continuous shock waves...
blurred vision
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( ❣️ ) queen b
Re. Hardcore no Touch
12th Oct 2018 10:00pm
Iambic pentameter, ab rhyme scheme both very tight. Well worth the read ...
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Why thank you, dear Poet, for enjoying my ode. And by the way, you’ll get no argument from me.
*squints her eyes & giggles*
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*squints her eyes & giggles*
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Re. Hardcore no Touch
Anonymous
16th Oct 2018 00:16am
Jade, you are a fantastic erotica writer!(I read a few others). Wow! and, also wow!!
There's definitely an art to it, and you are fantastic!
Matthew.
There's definitely an art to it, and you are fantastic!
Matthew.
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16th Oct 2018 1:08am
Well hello there, Matthew, how lovely to have you drop by to visit and share your thoughts with me. I’m terribly humbled & honored even... and yes, a little blushed as well!
Thank you, dear, for your enthusiastic enjoyment of my erotica. And yes, it truly is an art like every poetic genre. I’m appreciative that you recognize this.
With my very best,
ever
Jade
Thank you, dear, for your enthusiastic enjoyment of my erotica. And yes, it truly is an art like every poetic genre. I’m appreciative that you recognize this.
With my very best,
ever
Jade
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Anonymous
16th Oct 2018 1:27am
Jade, you're fantastic, and the honor's all mine. Thank you, though, and I'm so glad I finally met you today.
Please keep writing like that!!
Love,
Matthew.
Please keep writing like that!!
Love,
Matthew.
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Re. Hardcore no Touch
Envisioning this makes me a very happy boy tonight. An eloquent poem of what happens when her love is away.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
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11th Nov 2018 11:17pm
Dear John, those are sweetest thoughts expressed for this ink of deepest longing, and I thank you.