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Some People
Some People here
Are wondering why
I put myself out there
To let all see me cry
Why don't I censor
Why don't I hide
Because I've done that
For all my damn life
Internalizing
Agonizing
The chaos and lies
Projecting only the nice
And now it's my time
To be free and to find
Myself in the world
Just a silly crazy girl
Who wants to be heard
Maybe it's absurd
But I don't really care
What you think
And I swear
Hate all you like
I've already been there
And I've lost my fear
That's just how it is
And I'm ready to fly
Real do or die
Take it or leave it
What I do is all mine
Busting my rhymes
And living my life
So if it bothers
Or you think I'm pathetic
I'm sorry you don't get it
Stop being my father
Controlling my ways
I'm nobody's slave
But if you're one of the few
Accepting and kind
Seriously, thank you
For taking the time
And sharing your views
My friends, I love you!
Are wondering why
I put myself out there
To let all see me cry
Why don't I censor
Why don't I hide
Because I've done that
For all my damn life
Internalizing
Agonizing
The chaos and lies
Projecting only the nice
And now it's my time
To be free and to find
Myself in the world
Just a silly crazy girl
Who wants to be heard
Maybe it's absurd
But I don't really care
What you think
And I swear
Hate all you like
I've already been there
And I've lost my fear
That's just how it is
And I'm ready to fly
Real do or die
Take it or leave it
What I do is all mine
Busting my rhymes
And living my life
So if it bothers
Or you think I'm pathetic
I'm sorry you don't get it
Stop being my father
Controlling my ways
I'm nobody's slave
But if you're one of the few
Accepting and kind
Seriously, thank you
For taking the time
And sharing your views
My friends, I love you!
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Re. Some People
7th Oct 2018 8:09am
We're here for ya!!! Write it out
.get it out! It's better to arrive better . ....Than just arriving.
.get it out! It's better to arrive better . ....Than just arriving.
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Re: Re. Some People
7th Oct 2018 8:12am
You said it Ralphie, May I call you that?
Thanks. You get it. Now you're officially in the cool kids club..or maybe we're the outsiders..either way, you're in. Lol
Thanks. You get it. Now you're officially in the cool kids club..or maybe we're the outsiders..either way, you're in. Lol
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7th Oct 2018 8:14am
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7th Oct 2018 8:23am
Ok just Ralph works for me..will cut down on the confusion. I'll forget what story we're in otherwise. : )
It's a good name.
It's a good name.
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2018 10:59am
You go girl!! Be yourself always because you're awesome, my friend!!
Love,
Matthew.
Love,
Matthew.
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Re. Some People
7th Oct 2018 12:37pm
We are a pretty good bunch here well most of us are lol I love the truthfulness I love it because it is real you are showing a true heart of a poet much love and respect here 😉
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7th Oct 2018 2:40pm
Re. Some People
7th Oct 2018 1:07pm
Bukowski said you've got to own your own poems. There's a lot of wisdom in that. This is the place to let it all hang out. No judgements. You're a quality human. Rock it babe ....
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Re: Re. Some People
7th Oct 2018 2:42pm
Poetspeak, that's a great quote I will definitely let it all hang out. Lol
Is this a nude beach? Bwahaha
Is this a nude beach? Bwahaha
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2018 1:30pm
With you all the way my dear. I've been there before you. We don't hide our emotions, we let them out because we are real. Hugs J
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7th Oct 2018 2:43pm
Re. Some People
7th Oct 2018 3:31pm
We write to dispel our demons. You keep on keeping on. I, for one, will always stand in the crowd here, cheering you on. <3
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Re. Some People
7th Oct 2018 3:51pm
This is what writing is all about...opening yourself up no matter how much pain you
feel inside. Inspirational words...
feel inside. Inspirational words...
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8th Oct 2018 6:20am
This is a nice write and follow-up conversation. If this is a nude beach I like my body better here. That and the sky is purple.
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8th Oct 2018 6:22am
Re. Some People
8th Oct 2018 8:51am
Emotional Turpitude Some May Think
Is Rude Or Lewd Yet Subdued Not Nude
Is Hiding The Truth And To Occlude
Is The Prelude To Being Screwed
Not Viewed Attitude Of Disquietude
Better To Up The Current Amplitude
A Change Of Magnitude No More Servitude !
Is Rude Or Lewd Yet Subdued Not Nude
Is Hiding The Truth And To Occlude
Is The Prelude To Being Screwed
Not Viewed Attitude Of Disquietude
Better To Up The Current Amplitude
A Change Of Magnitude No More Servitude !
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