Beckoning

"My core evoked and impassioned, like a savage I am called to worship." The most highest form of worship is given when the nume we adore is in communion with us. We are sated by its glory. We become highpriests of the cult because we are in presence of the glory of the object of our worship and we collide with it until we are in ecstasy. You have described that moment so well and with pure passion. What a beautiful hymn. Welcome back. With vengeance dear Pandora. J

Your critique is always what I look forward to most! Know that please. You summed up exactly what I was going for! Thank you, I told you I'd be back soon my sweets.. appreciating the welcome! As always, adding to your list is humbling. Thank you so much, J. You are a dear!

juicy denouement....could almost smell the pleasurable outcome...love it...

Thank you for the comment love but most of all, a new word; denouement. I love finding new ones, it does a little something!;)

Sensuous seductive read; as might be put in rhyme:

His beckoning,
Love's reckoning.

Favourite lines:

like I savage I am called to worship

my glistening flesh upon his throne of affection

Unrestrained confessions of my pleasure left smeared upon him

I always appreciate hearing my favorite lines (well read); that means a lot to me. Also the hints of great rhymes. Thank you S_S!!

Brava Pandora! Super sensuous piece. This passage is so exciting and beautiful, "my glistening flesh upon his throne of affection. "

Thank you my sweet friend. I've been struggling without my muse so the encouragement means more than you realize!

Are you taking applications? Kidding of course 😂

Goodness. Felt a bit like a voyeur reading this. Captures the moment perfectly 😻

Thank you. That is like music to my ears. If one can't feel like a voyeur when reading then the writer is lacking!;)

Imagery is important to me and I'm never comfortable putting anything out that doesn't paint a scene. Here lately that has been lacking so your words mean the world to me; esp the add. Thank you so much!!

The gliding friction of these words have induced some needed lubrication to get through the day.  Hot write!

Thank you as I'm grinning ear to ear my friend!!;)

"salacity" - now there's an antiquated word - thank you for the discovery

If new words do something to you as the do me then all I can say is, sigh. I love them so I search them. Several detailed writers on another board were sent to the dictionary as they had only heard it phrased as salacious. Lol. Thank you dear!

Thank you. It's so nice to see a new face, I love them. I'm so very grateful you stopped by... I'm honored by you adding it as well!

Very sensual poem, yet I didn't feel like a voyeur. I felt like we were invited to witness the beautiful union between this couple, rather than shamelessly watching a "good fuck".

Excellent poem, Pandora. Keep up the great work!

Dearest Luna, your comments are as bright and graceful as I imagine you to be. Thank you so much for your kindness!🤗