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The Loop
Motion
Through
Space, time
Continuum
Past fallacies
And believers
Future fantasies
Of dream dreamers
The power to grasp
The clock's hands
In the hands of man
Distortion and
Destruction
The end
Huummmmm Buuzzzzz Whiirrrrr
Begin again
Motion
Through
Time, space
Continuum
Through
Space, time
Continuum
Past fallacies
And believers
Future fantasies
Of dream dreamers
The power to grasp
The clock's hands
In the hands of man
Distortion and
Destruction
The end
Huummmmm Buuzzzzz Whiirrrrr
Begin again
Motion
Through
Time, space
Continuum
Published 30th Sep 2018
Author's Note
Opening for It's Time To Write competition.
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30th Sep 2018 7:59pm
30th Sep 2018 8:04pm
30th Sep 2018 8:07pm
Yes only if we can could rewind the hands of time. But man would still abuse it or some would make the same mistakes again.
30th Sep 2018 8:09pm
30th Sep 2018 8:31pm
30th Sep 2018 8:40pm
1st Oct 2018 3:35am
1st Oct 2018 1:45pm
Nice poem...
It reminds me of an old Journey's song chorus:
*Ooh, the wheel in the sky keeps on turning... I don't know where I'll be tomorrow...*
... ... ... ...
It reminds me of an old Journey's song chorus:
*Ooh, the wheel in the sky keeps on turning... I don't know where I'll be tomorrow...*
... ... ... ...
1st Oct 2018 1:48pm
1st Oct 2018 1:49pm
1st Oct 2018 4:54pm
Love the simplicity of this, goes hand in hand with where you take usnon this circular piece
1st Oct 2018 5:05pm
