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Spit Roast
( a Quatern )
I love it when I taste you in my mouth,
When having sex to take me from the back.
The length your cock has filled me to the hilt,
And tries to sink another inch but can’t.
To have you head to root with grinding hips,
I love it when I taste you in my mouth.
Till from my throat emerges ‘tween my lips,
I wish you could go deep till it pops out.
To fuck me in and out, my nostrils flare,
Each time the pull & push you feel my teeth.
I love it when I taste you in my mouth,
To suck you with my cunt and orally.
To have the best of both worlds end to end,
To turn me on a spit while facing south.
You coo ”Say hello to my little friend...”
I love it when I taste you in my mouth.
I love it when I taste you in my mouth,
When having sex to take me from the back.
The length your cock has filled me to the hilt,
And tries to sink another inch but can’t.
To have you head to root with grinding hips,
I love it when I taste you in my mouth.
Till from my throat emerges ‘tween my lips,
I wish you could go deep till it pops out.
To fuck me in and out, my nostrils flare,
Each time the pull & push you feel my teeth.
I love it when I taste you in my mouth,
To suck you with my cunt and orally.
To have the best of both worlds end to end,
To turn me on a spit while facing south.
You coo ”Say hello to my little friend...”
I love it when I taste you in my mouth.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 30th Sep 2018
| Edited 12th Apr 2019
Author's Note
My lover cloned makes a 3-way.
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Re. Spit Roast
Anonymous
30th Sep 2018 7:14pm
Blimey JP. My Sunday evening just got very hot. You amaze me how you switch from poetic styles to another
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30th Sep 2018 8:14pm
Well what can I say, my Welsh friend, it’s been my passion since I was a kid - writing poetry that is.🤤
And I’m glad you were able to appreciate my naughty little ink.
And I’m glad you were able to appreciate my naughty little ink.
Re. Spit Roast
30th Sep 2018 7:17pm
sweet write ---- while in mouth sliding down the throat in out down south as popping out on commanded
keep up the good work
keep up the good work
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lol, oh my. I think you’ve got it going the wrong way maybe? It’s coming from the back, and all the way thru to peek out the mouth. You know... fantasizing that it’s physically possible?🤯
🤤
🤤
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30th Sep 2018 9:36pm
re you sure of this any think is possible unlikely could happen one day hope i am around to see not such lock no it won't be me
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30th Sep 2018 10:51pm
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30th Sep 2018 11:12pm
yes in deeded the way man keeps screwing around may invent a 30 foot long one that go from end to end LOL
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lol, Exactly! That’s the fantasy of this poem! Although... not 30ft, more like 3. I’d settle for 3ft! 🐍
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30th Sep 2018 7:51pm
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30th Sep 2018 7:56pm
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30th Sep 2018 8:04pm
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30th Sep 2018 8:08pm
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1st Oct 2018 5:56am
Oh my, thank you Lawrence for adding my ink to your Reading List, an honor.
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30th Sep 2018 9:42pm
You're a mistress of the quatern. This is a turn on at its best. Love your variance in styles. Wish I had your versatility...
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Aw that’s such a nice thing to say, thank you, my friend. I rather adore being Mistress to a poetry style. Now if I could borrow a gown from Aphrodite for best effects.🏛
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30th Sep 2018 10:44pm
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30th Sep 2018 11:00pm
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1st Oct 2018 00:21am
Ooo, I would like more of your words please.
And thanks, Adam, for stopping by with a healthy appetite.
And thanks, Adam, for stopping by with a healthy appetite.
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I kind of meant more words as in: what do you like about the poem? “Mmm” was a tiny appetizer. But those are provocative questions. My answers would be for my lover.
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Thank you, Adam, that’s a wonderful answer, and I understand perfectively.
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29th Oct 2018 11:48pm
I’d forgotten how much you actually said when I published this piece. Now to thank you for the RL (and no twist of the arm).
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1st Oct 2018 7:03am
I am feeling... hmmmmm? - inspired!
With quatern I began this morning's ride,
With quatern in my bed I'll soon reside.
Tomorrow in the time before the day.
A quatern answer, here will have its way.
Thomas
With quatern I began this morning's ride,
With quatern in my bed I'll soon reside.
Tomorrow in the time before the day.
A quatern answer, here will have its way.
Thomas
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2nd Oct 2018 00:04am
Ooh the exchange the morning hath brought us both
with so much resonating across that Oahu resort’s pearly lagoon.
Even my teeth have been feeling the ripples & vibes, the way they seem loose in my mouth.
Ahh, my mouth.
🤩
with so much resonating across that Oahu resort’s pearly lagoon.
Even my teeth have been feeling the ripples & vibes, the way they seem loose in my mouth.
Ahh, my mouth.
🤩
Re. Spit Roast
1st Oct 2018 10:56pm
Hot, sexy, erection-inducing, deliciously criminal...
I was going to say “there are no words”, but then all of the above *came* to mind. Way to fuck my brains up today, Jade, this is too good to me...
I was going to say “there are no words”, but then all of the above *came* to mind. Way to fuck my brains up today, Jade, this is too good to me...
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I’m really loving the evidence of the mindfuck you received, A., with your thumping, pumping, foreskin curling word spill... downright jump starts the real time takedown fantasy that had me in its grip when I wrote the piece out of the blue - phew! I thank you for that. You should add it to your list as a little token - or souvenir?
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2nd Oct 2018 00:02am
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17th Oct 2018 2:35am
again thinks all have read it
and
is late since invite was just now
imagery is beyond doubt
above the clouds
one can phantasize
just about anything
when performing the cummming act
till one is able to achieve orgasm
and the guy is able to fountain
great fun life is sexy
may be you have
just begun
again 's has ebbed
now helps gals and guys
with own experience
just enjoy with you smaller little boy's
boys
and
is late since invite was just now
imagery is beyond doubt
above the clouds
one can phantasize
just about anything
when performing the cummming act
till one is able to achieve orgasm
and the guy is able to fountain
great fun life is sexy
may be you have
just begun
again 's has ebbed
now helps gals and guys
with own experience
just enjoy with you smaller little boy's
boys
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Re. Spit Roast
22nd Oct 2018 8:45am
I love this. I like everything about it. and there is an energy that surges from every line.
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12th Nov 2018 00:01am
Dear Markis,
I missed your incoming comment somehow. And now I’ve found it, I wish to emphasize the joy your words bestow upon me, this grateful poetess! (your direct connection) Thank you very much.
I missed your incoming comment somehow. And now I’ve found it, I wish to emphasize the joy your words bestow upon me, this grateful poetess! (your direct connection) Thank you very much.
Re. Spit Roast
11th Nov 2018 1:28am
This burns with a craving for a deeper sensual encounter. Beautifully written with a sexual passion unsurpassed.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
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Thank you, John, that’s it, that’s it, you’ve struck the mother lode.
My God, I thank you for the insight.
My God, I thank you for the insight.