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Tomato
As a
Mexican
Husk tomato
Still
In its
Embryonic state,
i was
Busy
Forming
Single minded
Seeds
Inside
Un-til
The burst.
Mexican
Husk tomato
Still
In its
Embryonic state,
i was
Busy
Forming
Single minded
Seeds
Inside
Un-til
The burst.
Published 26th Sep 2018
| Edited 10th Oct 2018
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11th Oct 2018 11:32pm
This is hauntingly beautiful. You took the metaphor of the tomato for the birth of sexuality and flew with it. This is one of the most amazing poems of sensual awakening I've yet read. Truly a gem.
John
John
