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9/26/18
First last night,
late night touch
after the concert,
unexpected.
Then this morning,
the suggestion
that I had enough time
to maybe trim my beard.
She's noticing me again.
She's noticing me again.
late night touch
after the concert,
unexpected.
Then this morning,
the suggestion
that I had enough time
to maybe trim my beard.
She's noticing me again.
She's noticing me again.
Published 26th Sep 2018
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26th Sep 2018 8:46pm
Sometimes we forget the other person is in the same whirlwind as us. Moving peice, Kumar.
26th Sep 2018 9:04pm
Thank you for recognizing and empathizing. The moment I realized that the mere suggestion I trim up was a gesture of love, I lit up inside.
