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this too shall pass... a cold observation
time
is cold
its bitch of a daughter
history
is nobody's friend
today
money
muscle
media
may be your tools
to squash
bury
incinerate
the truth
bask not
dear despot
dear misogynist
dear tyrant
the so called shock jock
in the falsified
make believe glory
the bitch
the whore
that is history
will confine
you
and your truth
to its
rotten rancid pages
the blight
on humanity
that you are
who
only cared for no one
but self
crushing the other half
of humanity
under your
ego
will be dragged
dead or alive
or rather i should say
both dead and alive
to the pulpit
of the court that is time
and then
there will not come to aid
your connections
your power
your nepotistic despot brothers
worse is
you won't even know
and will have no control
then
of the reality that you denied
from light
sleep tight
if you can...
is cold
its bitch of a daughter
history
is nobody's friend
today
money
muscle
media
may be your tools
to squash
bury
incinerate
the truth
bask not
dear despot
dear misogynist
dear tyrant
the so called shock jock
in the falsified
make believe glory
the bitch
the whore
that is history
will confine
you
and your truth
to its
rotten rancid pages
the blight
on humanity
that you are
who
only cared for no one
but self
crushing the other half
of humanity
under your
ego
will be dragged
dead or alive
or rather i should say
both dead and alive
to the pulpit
of the court that is time
and then
there will not come to aid
your connections
your power
your nepotistic despot brothers
worse is
you won't even know
and will have no control
then
of the reality that you denied
from light
sleep tight
if you can...
Author's Note
A cold and for some 'hard'(in all senses) observation, a message to those who now think they 'own' the truth(and only their deluded version of the truth) and suppress anyone based on their gender, the misogynists, the chauvinists the the ego-centric maniacs who care about nothing but self.
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Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
25th Sep 2018 11:53am
Re: Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
5th Oct 2018 11:17pm
Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
25th Sep 2018 12:01pm
Powerful write my poet ... "time/is cold/its bitch of a daughter" ... love this stanza ... also the lower case of everything ... so e.e. cummings ... words to be heard ... understood ...
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Re: Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
5th Oct 2018 11:19pm
welcome
is the poet admired
welcome
is the review, genrous and kind
humbled
is the reaction here.
am truly unaware of e.e.cummings style
but i am humbled nonetheless
i just try keep it soft
the delivery..
appreciation
beyond words
is the poet admired
welcome
is the review, genrous and kind
humbled
is the reaction here.
am truly unaware of e.e.cummings style
but i am humbled nonetheless
i just try keep it soft
the delivery..
appreciation
beyond words
Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
Re: Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
5th Oct 2018 11:20pm
Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
25th Sep 2018 12:44pm
And what an observation this is!
I like how the first lines hit hard...
Great build up, great message, killer last lines!
I like how the first lines hit hard...
Great build up, great message, killer last lines!
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Re: Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
6th Oct 2018 00:55am
welcome
is the Poet Admired
Welcome
is the Friend!!
humbled i am
dear friend
by your presence
and kindness!
:-)
is the Poet Admired
Welcome
is the Friend!!
humbled i am
dear friend
by your presence
and kindness!
:-)
Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
25th Sep 2018 1:07pm
And with time, vipaka leaves no stone unturned. “Truth is singular. Its ‘versions’ are mistruths.” -Cloud Atlas.
Thank you for your outspoken wisdom my friend.
Thank you for your outspoken wisdom my friend.
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Re: Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
26th Sep 2018 1:48am
Re: Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
6th Oct 2018 00:56am
welcome
dear Friend Admired!
welcome
is your insight absolute!
grateful i am
for the presence
of both your kind self
and your wisdom!
dear Friend Admired!
welcome
is your insight absolute!
grateful i am
for the presence
of both your kind self
and your wisdom!
Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
Anonymous
25th Sep 2018 3:52pm
Cold One!
Awesome, my man!! I love that! Thank you for penning what a lot of us feel.
You are the man!
MZ.
Awesome, my man!! I love that! Thank you for penning what a lot of us feel.
You are the man!
MZ.
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Re: Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
6th Oct 2018 00:59am
Welcome
is the Friend Admired
Welcome
Is the Artist Humble!
Matt, my apologies dear friend, for the delay
in expressing my gratitude for your kindness
on this one and my other scribbles. Just letting you know
you're a welcome and warm addition
in the cold life here! :-)
appreciation
beyond words
Mate!
is the Friend Admired
Welcome
Is the Artist Humble!
Matt, my apologies dear friend, for the delay
in expressing my gratitude for your kindness
on this one and my other scribbles. Just letting you know
you're a welcome and warm addition
in the cold life here! :-)
appreciation
beyond words
Mate!
Re: Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
Anonymous
6th Oct 2018 1:18am
No need to apologize! Always enjoy the writing, the comments and the accent! Wish I was there(Australia?), it's starting to get cool here in NY.
TTYS my friend.
Thanks!
MZ.
TTYS my friend.
Thanks!
MZ.
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Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
25th Sep 2018 7:44pm
Yes!! Usually I like time to slow down, but in this case, the time can't pass quickly enough....
I like the simmering rage in this one.
I like the simmering rage in this one.
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Re: Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
6th Oct 2018 1:15am
welcome
is the Poet Admired
Welcome
is the friend
don't want to use the trending term..but in this instance ;-) i believe saying 'me too' isn't inappropriate lol!
appreciation
beyond words
is the Poet Admired
Welcome
is the friend
don't want to use the trending term..but in this instance ;-) i believe saying 'me too' isn't inappropriate lol!
appreciation
beyond words
Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
26th Sep 2018 1:42am
Fascinating write; strangely it feels like a collab with two voices; very difficult to do but you've pulled this of with great skill and style. Truth always bubbles to the surface as liars always leave a trail, just begging to be discovered. very clever write and good wisdom and message
sadly some liars sleep like babies and smugly smile with crocodile teeth but it's always temporary
An easy RL add - thank you for sharing
sadly some liars sleep like babies and smugly smile with crocodile teeth but it's always temporary
An easy RL add - thank you for sharing
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Re: Re. this too shall pass... a cold observation
6th Oct 2018 1:18am
welcome
is The Poet admired!
Welcome
is the Friend!
Thank You Dave!
glad i am to see both you and your in-depth review which i find utterly humbling for me(in a good way of course).
Indeed, the truth, always
bubbles to the surface. No such hing as fool-proofing that. Wisdom dear Friend, is not only reflected but glows bright, in your insight here! I am grateful for that.
My apologies for the delay in thanking you and my other kind friends here!
Humbled again by your honoring with the listing.
Thank You!
is The Poet admired!
Welcome
is the Friend!
Thank You Dave!
glad i am to see both you and your in-depth review which i find utterly humbling for me(in a good way of course).
Indeed, the truth, always
bubbles to the surface. No such hing as fool-proofing that. Wisdom dear Friend, is not only reflected but glows bright, in your insight here! I am grateful for that.
My apologies for the delay in thanking you and my other kind friends here!
Humbled again by your honoring with the listing.
Thank You!